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19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线（----），并在该词下面写出修改的词．
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Nowadays，mobile payment is becoming more and more popular with our shopping．In addition to pay in cash，by cheque and credit card，a consumer can use a mobile phone to pay for a wide range of services and goods．Comparing with those traditional mean，mobile payment is faster and more convenient．Besides，it can be used at any given time or place，thus saving much time and energy．Therefore，we can't overlook the fact it must be operated with a phone and a network．And it is only recently that the technology to support such systems has become wide available．It will be arouse public concern over its potential risk，such as the account security and other unexpected problems．Technology is changing its life rapidly，so we should get ready for it．

分析 现在手机付费在我们购物时越来越流行，同传统非方式相比，手机付费更快更便利．可是我们不能忽视它需要电话和网络这个事实，它也有一些潜在的危险，例如账户安全问题．

解答 Nowadays，mobile payment is becoming more and more popular with our shopping．In addition to pay in cash，by cheque and credit card，a consumer can use a mobile phone to pay for a wide range of services and goods．Comparing with those traditional mean，mobile payment is faster and more convenient．Besides，it can be used at any given time or place，thus saving much time and energy．Therefore，we can't overlook the fact∧it must be operated with a phone and a network．And it is only recently that the technology to support such systems has become wide available．It will be arouse public concern over its potential risk，such as the account security and other unexpected problems．Technology is changing its life rapidly，so we should get ready for it．
1．with-in．考查介词．表示"在我们购物的过程中"用介词in．
2．pay--paying．考查动名词．做In addition to的宾语用doing．  
3．and-or．考查连词． in cash，by cheque and credit card是可供选择的付款方式，所以用or．
4．Comparing-Compared．考查非谓语动词．做方式状语，和mobile payment 之间是被动关系，用Compared． 
5．mean---means．考查单词辨析．表示"传统的方式"用名词means表示"方式"． 
6．Therefore-However．考查连词．we can't overlook the fact it must be operated with a phone and a network．表示"我们不能忽视它需要电话和网络这个事实"，这和上句是转折关系，所以用However． 
7．fact后加that．考查同位语从句．it must be operated with a phone and a network是fact的同位语从句，因为从句句式完整，所以用that引导，不做句子成分，没有实意，不能省略．
8．wide---widely．考查副词的用法．修饰形容词available用副词widely．  
9．去掉 be．考查谓语动词的形式．arouse表示"激起"，不用被动．所以去掉 be． 
80．its-our．考查代词．本句表示"科技改变了我们的生活"，所以用our．

点评 考查短文改错．
名词性that-从句
由从属连词that引导的从句叫做名词性that-从句． That只起连接主句和从句的作用，在从句中不担任任何成分，本身也没有词义．名词性that-从句在句中能充当主 语、宾语、表语、同位语和形容词宾语，例如：
1．主语：That he is still alive is sheer luck．他还活着全靠运气．
2．宾语：John said that he was leaving for London on Wednesday．约翰说他星期三要到伦敦去．
3．表语：The fact is that he has not been seen recently．事实是近来谁也没有见过他．
4．同位语：The fact that he has not been seen recently disturbs everyone in his office．近来谁也没有见过他，这一事实令办公室所有的人不安．
5．形容词宾语：I am glad that you are satisfied with your job．你对工作满意我感到很高兴．

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