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20．第二节 书面表达
假如你是王莉，很喜欢绘画，并在网上注册加入了一个国际绘画爱好者论坛． 该论坛的版主Clark 想要办一个中学生美术展，请你根据以下提示给Clark 写一封电子邮件，向他提出一些意见和建议．
1．选择中学生喜欢的主题；
2．征集一些中学生自己创作的作品；
3．选一些名人的代表作品，配上作品解读；
4．介绍著名画家的励志故事．
注意：1．词数在100左右（开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
Dear Clark，
Dear Clark，
I heard that you would like to hold an art exhibition for middle school students．I'm glad to hear this and here are some suggestions，which I think may be of some help．
Firstly，why not choose a theme attracting children's attention since it is mainly aimed at middle school students？It is also a good choice to exhibit some paintings drawn by them．If they can see their own or their peers'works on show，they might be more interested in it．What's more，it would be better to display some paintings of famous artists so as to guide children to appreciate the beauty of these paintings．Meanwhile，you can pick out some inspiring stories of these well-known artists to encourage children to continue working hard．
That's what I want to say．And I hope your exhibition will be a complete success．
Yours sincerely
Wang  Li

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于办一个中学生美术展的建议的书信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容主要包括：一点明主题；二关于中学生美术展的建议（这一段要包括题目要求的语言点）；三表达希望．
高分句型：
1．I'm glad to hear this and here are some suggestions，which I think may be of some help．句子里which 引导非限制是定语从句，代指先行词 some suggestions；of some help=helpful，表示"有帮助的"．
听说这件事我很高兴，这里有一些建议，我认为可能会对你有帮助．
2．Firstly，why not choose a theme attracting children's attention since it is mainly aimed at middle school students？句子里非谓语动词attracting 做a theme 的定语，二者之间是主动关系． be aimed at 表示"旨在于"．
首先，既然画展的对象是中学生，为什么不选择一个能吸引学生注意力的主题呢？

解答 Dear Clark，
 I heard that you would like to hold an art exhibition for middle school students．I'm glad to hear this and here are some suggestions，which I think may be of some help．【高分句型一】（点明主题）
 Firstly，why not choose a theme attracting children's attention since it is mainly aimed at middle school students？【高分句型二】It is also a good choice to exhibit some paintings drawn by them．If they can see their own or their peers'works on show，they might be more interested in it．What's more，it would be better to display some paintings of famous artists so as to guide children to appreciate the beauty of these paintings．Meanwhile，you can pick out some inspiring stories of these well-known artists to encourage children to continue working hard．（关于中学生美术展的建议，包括题目要求的语言点） 
That's what I want to say．And I hope your exhibition will be a complete success．（表达希望）
                                                                    Yours sincerely
                                                                            Wang Li

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作时同一个意思最好不用同一个词语或者句式表达，要有变化，这样就会使得文章灵活．例如本文中的of some help和helpful表示同一个含义．又如定语从句和非谓语动词的转换：
He is the man talked ahout by us．=He is the man who is talked about by us．