题目内容
5.假定你是李华,上个月你在某国外购物网站订购了一台新款电子阅读器,然而收到的产品并不是所订购的.请你给该网站的负责人谢英语投诉信,要点如下1投诉内容,阅读器款式太旧,容量太小
2 解决办法,更换阅读器或退货
3 希望问题尽快解决.
注意
1字数:100左右
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3开头语和结束语已给出,不计入总字数.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a customer from China.I am writing to you because
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua.
分析 本篇书面表达是要求写封投诉信,信件是人们日常生活中常用的一种应用文体,同学们应该对写作格式很熟悉,但是在写作时要注意以下方面:一、因为是反映问题,所以要求语言简洁,条理清楚,把存在的问题和自己的要求表达准确;二、虽然购买过程中存在问题,但是语言仍要委婉,礼貌显示出作者的修养;三、时态方面,因为是叙述购买产品的问题,所以可以用一般现在时态,期待解决办法部分可以使用将来时态.四、注意适当增加细节,使语言更为通顺,行文更为连贯.
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语be happy with 对…感到满意;deal with 处理;Second,its memory is small,which makes it impossible for me to store as many e-books as I want这个句子运用到which引导的非限制性定语从句;I would appreciate it if you could change the e-reader for me or,if this is not possible,return my money.这个句子it作形式宾语,真正的宾语是后面不定式.
I am writing to you because I am not happy with the e-reader I bought from your website last month.(高分句型一)
I know your company has a good reputation for selling goods of high quality but I am not satisfied with the e-reader I received.(高分句型二)
The one I got is an out-of-date version.Second,its memory is small,which makes it impossible for me to store as many e-books as I want.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a customer from China.I am writing to you because I am not happy with the e-reader I bought from your website last month.(高分句型一)
I know your company has a good reputation for selling goods of high quality but I am not satisfied with the e-reader I received.(高分句型二) First,the e-reader you sent me was not the one I ordered.The one I got is an out-of-date version.Second,its memory is small,which makes it impossible for me to store as many e-books as I want.(高分句型三)
I would appreciate it if you could change the e-reader for me or,if this is not possible,return my money.I hope that my problem can be dealt with soon.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.