Question

【题目】你校学生会举办捐助活动以资助贫困地区儿童上学。请你为国际部的外籍学生写一份英文通知：

1、介绍活动的目的

2、号召大家踊跃捐款、捐物（书籍、文具、衣物），并参加义卖活动

3、义卖时间、地点：周六上午9点，校阶梯教室

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2． 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。

提示词：义卖：Charity Sale； 阶梯教室：lecture hall

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Answer 1

【答案】

NOTICE

The Students’ Union of our school is scheduled to hold a Charity Sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area. The efforts to be made are to support the children to continue their school education.

You are also asked to donate some of your books, stationeries and clothes, which might be of some use to the kids in those areas. At 9 a.m. this Saturday, the Charity Sale starts at the lecture hall of our school. We are expecting you to come and offer a helping hand. Remember, all the money will go to the support of those needy children and every donation makes a difference.

The Students’ Union

【解析】

试题分析：你校学生会举办捐助活动以资助贫困地区儿童上学。请你为国际部的外籍学生写一份英文通知：1、介绍活动的目的；2、号召大家踊跃捐款、捐物（书籍、文具、衣物），并参加义卖活动；3、义卖时间、地点：周六上午9点，校阶梯教室。写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯.要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1. 词数100左右；2． 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。

【亮点说明】The Students’ Union of our school is scheduled to hold a Charity Sale on Saturday to raise money for children in the poverty-stricken area.被动语态的运用；The efforts to be made are to support the children to continue their school education.动词不定式被动式作定语；You are also asked to donate some of your books, stationeries and clothes, which might be of some use to the kids in those areas被动语态和非限制性定语从句的结合；Remember, all the money will go to the support of those needy children and every donation makes a difference.并列句的运用。