Question

近几年来，随着中国经济的快速发展，节假日出国的人越来越多，但是出国游中存在许多不文明行为。请你根据以下提示以“To Be a Good Tourist”为题写一篇120字左右的短文。

1.不良行为有：乱扔垃圾，大声喧哗，不排队等 。

2.文明做法是：友好安静懂礼貌，遵循当地风俗和法规，保护生态环境等。

3. 你的看法。

In recent years with the rapid development of China’s economy,

Answer 1

In recent years, with the rapid development of China’s economy, more and more Chinese people travel to foreign countries during their holidays and festivals. But there’re many bad behaviors among them.

Some people throw rubbish everywhere. They often make loud noises in public places. Besides, some people jump the queue while others are waiting. All these behaviors seriously affect the image of Chinese people. What should we do? Firstly, we should be friendly and keep quiet in public places. Secondly, following the local customs and obeying their laws are also necessary. Also, it’s very important to protect the natural environment when travelling.

In my opinion, it’s time for us to get rid of our bad habits to be good tourists. Only in this way can we be respected by foreign people when we are in foreign countries. (132 words)

【解析】

试题分析：近几年来，随着中国经济的快速发展，节假日出国的人越来越多，但是出国游中存在许多不文明行为。请你根据以下提示以“To Be a Good Tourist”为题写一篇120字左右的短文。1.不良行为有：乱扔垃圾，大声喧哗，不排队等 。2.文明做法是：友好安静懂礼貌，遵循当地风俗和法规，保护生态环境等。3. 你的看法。要把所提示的点写全，把汉语翻译成通顺的英语句子，可根据内容要点适当增加细节，写作时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩，注意要求的字数在120词左右，不要太多或太少。特别注意最后要有你的看法，这样才能体现出文章的完整。

【亮点说明】Besides, some people jump the queue while others are waiting.此句运用了while引导的并列句；What should we do?这是一个问句，使文章上下句衔接的非常好；we should be friendly and keep quiet in public places.句中使用了并列谓语，严谨到位；Also, it’s very important to protect the natural environment when travelling.在此句中it作形式主语，真正的主语是后面的动词不定式短语，并在句中使用了省略的时间状语从句，即when加现在分词的结构，更显的文中的句型丰富多彩；it’s time for us to get rid of our bad habits to be good tourists. It作形式主语，动词不定式复合结构做句子的真正主语；Only in this way can we be respected by foreign people when we are in foreign countries.这是一个部分倒装的句子，作为文章的压轴句子，更为文章锦上添花。另外，But/Besides/Firstly /Secondly /Also/ In my opinion的运用，使句子衔接自然，层次分明，让人回味无穷。

考点：这是一篇广告类的话题作文。