题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华,计划暑假间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:住宿accommodation
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am a Chinese student named Li Hua. I have planned to go to Britain to attend a summer course during the summer vacation. I’ve read your ad, and I’d like to know more about your six-week English course.
Firstly, when will the course start and how many students will there be in a class? I prefer a small class to a large one with too many students. Secondly, how many class hours will there be per week? I hope we will have time to go sightseeing in the neighborhood. Thirdly, I wonder how much you will charge us for the six-week course. Besides, where will I live when I study there? I would prefer a quiet room so that I can sleep well.
I’ d appreciate your writing me back as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假定你是李华,计划暑假间去英国学习英语,为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意,请给该校写封信,询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】语句简练,结构合理,条理清楚,句中还运用了高级句式。I’ve read your ad, and I’d like to know more about your six-week English course. 并列句运用恰当;第二段中when will the course start and how many students will there be in a class? how many class hours will there be per week? where will I live when I study there?用特殊疑问句开头,安排巧妙;I hope we will have time to go sightseeing in the neighborhood.宾语从句用于句中;I would prefer a quiet room so that I can sleep well. 句中使用目的状语从句。