题目内容
【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分
Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage. As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys to the children. They were delighting to receive the gifts. In the morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we cooked and had lunch here. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving the orphanage, we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and help, but in return, they gave us their smiles and love.
【答案】1.第一句:去掉had
2.第二句:volunteer→volunteers
3.第三句:well后加as
4.第四句:delighting→delighted
5.第五句:when→that/which
6.第六句:here→there
7.第八句:take→taken
8.they→we
9.第九句:happily→happy
10.第十句:but→and
【解析】本文是一篇记叙文。主要讲述了上周学校组织去看望孤儿院孩子的活动,“我”作为志愿者也参加了。“我们”给孩子们带去了玩具,书本等礼物,还陪他们一起玩游戏。中午在那里吃饭,下午给他们表演节目,在离开前给他们拍了照片。这是一次很有趣也有意义的活动,我们收获了孩子们的爱与笑脸。
考查时态。our school organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage.As one of the volunteers.由“Last Saturday”可知,事情发生在过去,要用一般过去式,故将had去掉。
考查名词单复数。As one of the volunteers.One of 表示……中的一个,后面接复数形式,故将volunteer改成volunteers。
考查固定搭配。We took many books as well as many kinds of school supplies and toys to the children.as well as,也。此处指既有书,也有校园用品和玩具,故在well后加上as。
考查形容词。 They were delighted to receive the gifts.delighting让人开心的; delighted开心的,愉悦的。此处形容人,故将delighting 改为delighted。
考查先行词。 We played some games with them which/that we used to play in our childhood. 此处定语从句先行词为games,名词,用which 或that修饰,而when修饰时间,不符合题意,故将when改为 which或 that。
考查指示代词。Then we cooked and had lunch there.此处讲我们在local orphanage的经历,讲述之前的事情,现在已经不在那里了,用there指代那个地方。故将here改为there。
考查动词。We had photos taken with them. had sth. done 让……被做,此处指拍照片,had photos taken,故将take改为 taken。
考查主语一致。We had photos taken with them and gave them our contact details so that we could keep in touch with one another. 由“we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details。” 可知,整句主语为we,为保持主语一致,故将they改为we。
考查形容词。 Each of us had a happy time.此处指度过快乐的时光,形容词作定语修饰名词,故将happily 改为happy。
10.考查连词。We gave the children our care and help, and in return, they gave us their smiles and love.此处指我们给孩子们带去了关爱与帮助,同时我们也收获了笑容与爱,两分句为并列意思,故将but改为 and。