题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tim 想要在暑假时到中国旅游,发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐一个城市。
2. 给出推荐理由。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tim,
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Yours
LiHua
【答案】Dear Tim,
I'm glad to recommend a tourist city for you to spend your coming summer holiday.As far as I'm concerned,Beijing is the best choice for you.
To start with,Beijing,the capital of China,is a very attractive city with a long history.It lies in the north of China and is not too hot at this time of the year.You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing,of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck.I hope you will enjoy it.Besides,there are a great number of tourist attractions worth visiting,such as the Great Wall,the Summer Palace and the Forbidden City.These scenic spots have attracted millions of tourists every year.I promise you will have a wonderful time here in Beijing.
I can act as your guide if you like,and I am ready to offer help whenever you need it.I'm looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours
LiHua
【解析】
这是一篇应用文,要求写一封信。
第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一,假定你是李华,你的英国朋友 Tim 想要在暑假时到中国旅游,发邮件向你征求建议。请你回复一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 推荐一个城市。
2. 给出推荐理由。
第二,人称为第一人称和第三人称。第三,时态为一般现在时和一般将来时。
第二步:布局段落,确定主要段落,次要段落,段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段,推荐一个城市。第二段, 给出推荐理由。第三段,表达期望。
第三步:确定关键词汇和短语: recommend ,attractive,the roast Beijing duck,enjoy,a great number of,be worth visiting,be ready to do sth.
第四步:确定较为高级的句子:of which 引导的定语从句You can find all kinds of delicious food in Beijing,of which the most famous is the roast Beijing duck.省略that的宾语从句I promise you will have a wonderfully time here in Beijing.If引导的条件状语从句 I can act as your guide if you like.
第五步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接: To start with, Besides, Finally.
第六步:注意书写,保持卷面整洁,避免划线,乱擦。