Question

【题目】作文

某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，结果如下。请根据表格1所给信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并针对表格2中任意一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的看法。

注意：1 词数120左右。

2 文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

表格一 (网购最吸引用户的方面)

40%	商品种类丰富
33%	商品价格实惠
25%	不受时间地域限制
5%	结交新朋友

表格二 （网购用户最担心的方面）

55%	质量问题
27%	售后服务
18%	交易安全

Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows.

Chart 1 shows the reasons why people choose to shop online. Of all the people surveyed, 49%think that there are many varieties of products in online shops. About one third of them say that reasonable price is the most appealing factor. And 25% hold that online shopping is so convinient that consumers can buy what they want anywhere at any time. Interestingly, 5%of teh people even mention that they can make new friends through online shopping.

However, many consumers also express their concerns about online shopping. Among all the concerns in Chart 2, the quality of the products, which accounts for as much as 55%, attracts my attention. Personally, I agree that what consumers get from online shops sometimes differs from what can be seen in the picture, which can be very disappointing. Therefore, we should make sure teh product is of good quality before making a purchase.

【解析】

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