题目内容
【题目】书面表达
假定你是李华,你所在的学校将在暑假期间举办“澳大利亚文化展览”。请你根据以下要点给澳大利亚朋友Peterson写一封信,请他届时前来给你们做一次讲座。
目的:帮助师生了解澳大利亚文化
内容:简要介绍澳大利亚的风土人情
日期:8月第一周内任意一天的下午
时间:3:00-5:00,约2个小时
注 意:可增加细节,使结构完整,词数不少于100。开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Peterson,
Our school is planning to hold _____________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Peterson,
Our school is planning to hold an Australian culture show this summer vacation. I’m writing to invite you to give us a lecture about the people and customs on the continent of Australia.
We would like to get our teachers and students to learn more about your history and special culture. You may choose any day of the first week in August and give us the talk that afternoon, starting from 3:00 pm. and ending at about 5:00 pm..
Your presence at this occasion will be our greatest honor, and we’re sure your talk will be a success. I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本文是写一封信,关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,本文的主题是给澳大利亚朋友Peterson写一封信,请他在“澳大利亚文化展览”给你们做一次讲座。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】学生写作要有灵活性,同时要表现出较好的英语语言表达能力。文章使用了很好的短语和句子:We would like to,我们想要give us a lecture给我们做一次讲座,the people and customs on the continent of Australia澳大利亚的风土人情。Your presence at this occasion will be our greatest honor,是主语从句,You may choose any day of the first week in August and give us the talk that afternoon, starting from 3:00 pm. and ending at about 5:00 pm..表达清晰,句子完整出彩。
