Question

【题目】调查表明，有许多青少年有不吃早餐的习惯。请根据表格内容用英语写一篇短文。

原因	晚上学习太晚，早上起得迟；用吃早餐的钱去上网玩游戏；一些女孩为保持苗条身材常不吃早餐。
结果	不利于身体健康；上课时想睡觉；影响记忆力和学习成绩。
建议	早餐不可少，它能提供全天所需能量的30%。青少年健康应从早餐开始。

注意：1.不要逐条翻译，可适当增加情节，使内容连贯。

2.词数100左右；

3.参考词汇：苗条的：slim能量：energy。

A survey shows that many students do not have breakfast.________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】A survey shows that many students do not have breakfast.

There are different reasons for this.Some students study late into the night and get up late,so there is not enough time to have breakfast.Some students do not have breakfast to save money to play games on the Internet. Besides, some girls want to stay slim and often go to school without breakfast.If teenagers often don't have breakfast,it is bad for their health.They will feel sleepy in class.It will have bad effects on their memories and studies.

In fact,breakfast plays an important part.It can provide us with 30% of the energy that the body needs the whole day.To keep fit,teenagers should start their day with a regular breakfast.

【解析】这是一篇提纲作文，要求根据表格内容用英文写一篇短文，包括学生不吃早餐的原因，结果以及提出相应的建议。应根据表格所列提纲，灵活运用不同的句式，适当增加情节，是文章表达流畅，结构层次突出。此篇文章应主要包括三部分内容：

学生不吃早餐的原因：晚上学习太晚，早上起得迟；用吃早餐的钱去上网玩游戏；一些女孩为保持苗条身材常不吃早餐

学生不吃早餐的后果：不利于身体健康；上课时想睡觉；影响记忆力和学习成绩

提出相应建议：早餐不可少，它能提供全天所需能量的30%。青少年健康应从早餐开始

写作时应注意本文是基于调差报告来写的，应用一般现在时，注意语态。

【范文亮点】

结构层次分明，第一段用一句话总结调差报告结果，第二段紧接着阐明原因，说出后果，最后一段说明早餐的重要性并对学生提出建议。

连接词使用自然，使文章表达清晰连贯。阐明原因时用“some students……some students……besides……”三个紧密连接的句子表达，使文意表达清晰自然流畅。