题目内容
假如你是李华,收到笔友Mary的如下来信。请你给Mary回信,给她提出建议。提示:
1.可用句式:
Why not...?
You should/can...
2.写作要点:
告诉Mary:
?给她的朋友写信,告诉她诚实的重要性及作弊的坏处;
?帮助她的朋友学习数学,使她对学习数学充满信心;
?如果她的英语比你好,可以让她帮你学英语,因为互帮互助可以加深(deepen)友谊。
3.词数100左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry you are having trouble with your friend. Here are some tips that may help you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Mary,
I am sorry you are having trouble with your friend. Here are some tips that may help you.
First, if she doesn’t talk to you, why not write to her? You can explain the importance of honesty and the harm of cheating in the exam. I’m sure she will understand you. Also, you can try to help her maths.Only in this way can she make progress and believe in herself.If she is better than you in English, you can ask her to help you with your English. I’m sure your friendship will be deepened by helping each other.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:本次作文是个提纲作文,写作要点明确,且有具体的句式及单词提示,所以难度不大。但首先要明确写作体裁(书信体),写作任务(建议),写作人称(对象为my friend :Mary),基本时态:一般现在时,因为文章重在“建议”,故要有情态动词的适当使用。
亮点说明:该篇范文结构清晰,要点全面,行文流畅,用词准确,且注重句式的变化,例如:定语从句“Here are some tips that may help you.”,宾语从句“ I’m sure she will understand you. ”,提出建议的句式“ why not write to her?”,倒装句式“Only in this way can she make progress and believe in herself.”。这些句式的成功使用,使得一篇相对简单的文章也不会流于平淡,更能彰显作者不凡的写作能力。