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【题目】假定你是李华。你校国际学生中心(International Student Center)将在本周六举办一年一度的假日派对,请给你的留学生朋友Jack写一封邀请信。主要内容包括:
1.派对时间、地点;
2.派对活动内容;
3.期待他的参与。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Jack,
I’d like to tell you that the International Student Center in our school will hold an annual holiday party in the school sports center this Saturday, whose theme is “fun”.
There are some activities for students to choose from in this party. Firstly, indoor swimming contests are especially for swimming lovers just to have fun. Secondly, there will be a student concert where we can really entertain and relax ourselves. What’s more, an activity for making friends will be arranged to help us communicate across borders and cultures, happily and freely.
Please join us to enjoy the special fun. Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于提纲类作文,要求假定你是李华,你校国际学生中心(International Student Center)将在本周六举办一年一度的假日派对,请给你的留学生朋友Jack写一封邀请信。考虑用一般将来时来写。要点:1.排队时间、地点;2.派对活动内容;3.期待他的参与。这篇文章对于考生的综合能力要求较高,要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。需要注意紧扣文章主题,给出的要点都需要包括,缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合给出的开头,不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。
【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面,结构紧凑,是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语,为文章增色不少,如: have fun玩得开心,What’s more另外。还使用了定语从句I’d like to tell you that the International Student Center in our school will hold an annual holiday party in the school sports center this Saturday, whose theme is “fun”.和定语从句Secondly, there will be a student concert where we can really entertain and relax ourselves.等多种句式结构,增加了文章的可读性。