Question

8．假设你是新华中学的学生李华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼．请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信：
1．帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑．
2．给他提出建议：学习普通话，跟同学交流意见．
3．陈述你帮助他的具体打算．
4．词数：120词左右．
Dear Li Ming，
I'm sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent．
I am sure，with your effort，you can manage to overcome these difficulties．In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends．In your spare time，you should play basketball or go to some parties．At last，I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently．As for me，I'll encourage more students to study and play with you．Also，I'll help you with your study and daily life．In a word，I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．
I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是李华给班里从外地转来一名同学李明的一封信．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑；二给他提出建议：学习普通话，跟同学交流意见．；三自己帮助他的具体打算；四提出希望．
高分句型：
1．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent句子里 I believe是插入语； that引导表语从句 you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates；make fun of your accent表示"取笑你的口音"．
我相信其中的一个原因是你太害羞而不能自信地和同学交谈，可能你害怕你的同学会取笑你的口音．
2．In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends．句子里learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently 是动名词做主语，表示"学习普通话，经常跟同学交流对笔记"．
依我看来，学习普通话，经常跟同学交流对笔记是你交朋友的好方法．

解答 Dear Li Ming，
      I'm sorry to know that you feel distressed at your new class．One of the reasons，I believe，is that you might be too shy to talk confidently with your classmates and maybe you are afraid that your classmates will make fun of your accent．【高分句型一】（帮他分析原因：害羞，怕同学取笑）
     I am sure，with your effort，you can manage to overcome these difficulties．In my opinion，learning to speak Putonghua and comparing notes with your classmates frequently are good ways for you to make new friends．【高分句型二】In your spare time，you should play basketball or go to some parties．At last，I suggest that you should communicate with others confidently．（给他提出建议：学习普通话，跟同学交流意见．）As for me，I'll encourage more students to study and play with you．Also，I'll help you with your study and daily life．In a word，I'm ready to help you whenever you turn to me for help．（自己帮助他的具体打算） 
        I hope you can adapt to the new school life as soon as possible．（提出希望）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       Yours
                                                                  Li Hua

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写作文的时候，要审查书面表达题干中隐含的读者对象和撰写人，即搞清楚此篇文章是"由谁写给谁"的．写稿人是谁一般都已明确指出，给出形式假设环境中的"某人"，如"假设你是李华"，写作时即用第一人称"我"，即李华．而读者对象有时没有明示，要考生自己去进行判断．