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11．加拿大高中生David在互联网上登出启事notice，希望结识一位中国朋友，以便学习中国的语言、文化．假设你是光明中学的李华，请在看到这则启事后，用英文给David发出一封电子邮件．主要内容包括：
（1）你怎样得知他的愿望
（2）你愿意成为他的朋友
（3）你打算如何帮助他
（4）你盼望他的回复
注意：（1）词数100左右；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数．
Dear David，
My name is Li Hua．I‘m a Chinese high school student and I'm a boy of 17 years old．
I have read the notice that you published on Internet．（高分句型一）So I know you are interested in Chinese language and culture．I'm glad to be your friend and we can help each other．You may send emails to me and ask me questions which you are interested in，and I'll reply to you as soon as I can．（高分句型二） If I don't know the answer，I'll seek help from my teacher．So，we can make progress together．
Wish your reply soon．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 这是一篇以邮件形式的作文，注意邮件的格式，我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．本作文中给出的要点比较简略，故需要自由发挥的地方较多．需要注意不要偏离文章中心．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头结尾，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：on Internet网上；be interested in 对…感兴趣；as soon as I can．尽可能地快；seek help寻求帮助；make progress取得进步；
  I have read the notice that you published on Internet．（高分句型一）
You may send emails to me and ask me questions which you are interested in，and I'll reply to you as soon as I can．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear David，
      My name is Li Hua．I‘m a Chinese high school student and I'm a boy of 17 years old．
      I have read the notice that you published on Internet．（高分句型一）So I know you are interested in Chinese language and culture．I'm glad to be your friend and we can help each other．You may send emails to me and ask me questions which you are interested in，and I'll reply to you as soon as I can．（高分句型二） If I don't know the answer，I'll seek help from my teacher．So，we can make progress together．
       Wish your reply soon．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                            Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．

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Dear Mr．Frank，
It's a fairly long time since you left our school．I miss you very much．Is everything going well？
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