Question

1．假设你是某大学的学生李津，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿．
•个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）
•组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）
•组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）
•表达竞选的愿望．
注意：
（1）词数不少于100；
（2）请勿提及真实学校姓名
（3）可适当的加入细节，以使内容充实，行文连贯；
（4）开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：
副主席：vice president
竞选：run for
Good afternoon，my dear friends，
My name is Li Jin，I feel excited to have the honor of running for vice president of our English Club．I think I am fully qualified for the job．
Firstly，I am easygoing and can communicate with others in English fluently．Secondly，as a dynamic person，I have rich experience in organizing activities，such as English parties and all kinds of lectures．I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates if I get the chance．If I am lucky enough to be elected，I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful!I sincerely hope you can give me a chance．
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇竞选演讲稿，参选校英语俱乐部新一届副主席．
写作时人称以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主．
写作要点：1．个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）；2．组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）；3．组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）；4．表达竞选的愿望．
重要短语：have the honor of …（有幸做某事），run for（参加…竞选），be qualified for（能胜任…），communicate with sb （与某人交际），have rich experience in （有丰富的经验），all kinds of （各种各样的），spare no efforts（不遗余力），make great contributions to…（做贡献），serve sb （服务于某人），try to do （努力做某事），make one's life more colorful（使某人的生活更丰富），be enough to do （足够做某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates if I get the chance．
此处是由连词"if"引导的条件状语从句，主句为"I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates"，主句中"and"连接两个并列的动作"make good plans"和"spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools"．
【高分句型二】
2．If I am lucky enough to be elected，I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful!
此处是由连词"if"引导的条件状语从句，主句为"I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful"．

解答 Good afternoon，my dear friends，
      My name is Li Jin．I feel excited to have the honor of running for vice president of our English Club．I think I am fully qualified for the job．Firstly，I am easygoing and can communicate with others in English fluently．Secondly，as a dynamic person，I have rich experience in organizing activities，such as  English parties and all kinds of lectures．（个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等））
I will make good plans and spare no efforts to do more exchanges with other schools by holding English Speech Competition and debates if I get the chance．【高分句型一】（组织校内的活动的设想（如英语晚会等）、组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、等））
 If I am lucky enough to be elected，I will make great contributions to serve students and try to make their life more colorful!【高分句型二】I sincerely hope you can give me a chance．Thank you!（表达竞选的愿望）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．