题目内容
【题目】 假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发了电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件。
1 未及时回信的原因。
2 你假期的打算(如做兼职 旅游 做志愿者等)。
注意:1.词数120左右。
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
【答案】
Dear Tom:
I am sorry for not answering your email in time because I have been busy with going over my lessons for the final exams .My plans for the coming summer vacation are as follows.
To start with, I intend to do a part-time job ,through which not only can I earn money by myself but also broaden my horizons .In addition, I am considering taking a trip to Hang Zhou, where I can visit some well-known places of interest. What' more, I'll work as a volunteer ,which I have been looking forward to for so long .
By the way,what's your plan ? I hope to be told your arrangements for the coming vacation.
【解析】
试题分析:假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Tom一周前给你发了电子邮件,询问你暑假里的打算,但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件。1 未及时回信的原因。2 你假期的打算(如做兼职 旅游 做志愿者等)。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数120左右。2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇邮件,内容齐全,结构严谨,层次分明,布局合理,语言精练,同时运用高级句子。原因状语从句的使用:I am sorry for not answering your email in time because I have been busy with going over my lessons for the final exams。非限制性定语从句的使用尤其精彩:I intend to do a part-time job ,through which not only can I earn money by myself but also broaden my horizons;I am considering taking a trip to Hang Zhou, where I can visit some well-known places of interest.连接词的合理使用也使文章结构更清晰:To start with, In addition, What' more, By the way。