Question

【题目】书面表达

请以“The person I admire most” 为题，用英语写一篇120词左右的短文。要求包括以下三个部分内容：

1. 对人物的简单介绍

2. 喜欢该人物的理由

3. 从该人物身上得到的启示

Answer 1

【答案】

There are quite a few people that I admire greatly, but the one that I admire most is Thomas Edison. He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating. In fact, he was a man full of imagination.

I admire Edison a lot because of his great contribution to the world. He had more than 1,000 inventions. In his life time, he was always eager to know how things worked, which helped him to earn the nickname “the Wizard of Melo Park.”. He was also so diligent that he worked day and night. And this explained why he had so many great inventions.

What impresses me most is his famous saying, “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety—nine percent perspiration.” Probably I can’t be an Edison myself, but I can be a hardworking learner. From him, I realize the secret to success is not when or where you were born, but what you are doing and how you do it in your life.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于议论文，根据要求写一个自己最崇拜的人。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如He was once thought to be a boy who was not worth educating.限定定语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语be eager to, great contribution to等短语。