题目内容
【题目】书面表达,请以My Home Town为话题写一篇100词左右的发言稿。
开头已给出:
Hello, classmates.Today I will introduce my home town.
【答案】
Hello, classmates.Today I will introduce my home town.
My home town is a beautiful place. It stands beside a wide river and is rich in fish and rice.
But in the old days it was a poor and backward little town. Many people had no work. They lived a hard life.
In 1949 my hometown was liberated. Since then great changes have taken place there. The streets have been widened. Factories, schools, hospitals, cinemas and theatres have sprung up one after another. The life of the people is greatly improved.
I love my hometown. All the more I love its people. They are working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful.
【解析】
本文是一篇话题类的作文,主要介绍了自己美丽的家乡。话题类的作文属于开放性的文章,但是要避免偏离话题。本文的段落清晰,主旨鲜明,主要分成以下几个部分:第一部分总体介绍了自己的家乡;第二部分写了过去自己的家乡的不景气;第三部分写了后来家乡的发展以及它的美;最后一部分表达了自己对家乡的爱。文章的结构明显,紧扣主题。在用词也很新颖,句型结构也很完整,值得学生加以借鉴。