Question

【题目】写作

假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。请根据下表所提供的信息用英语以书信形式给予答复。请在答题卡上作答。

活动时间	7月15日～22日或8月15日～22日
活动内容	参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲 听英语讲座 表演英语短剧 看英语电影 教外宾学中文
对活动内容的 建议或要求

请注意：

1. 选择适合你的时间，并说明理由；

2. 选择两项你喜欢的活动，并说明理由；

3. 对活动内容提出至少一个建议或要求；

4. 词数：100左右；信的开头和结尾已给出。

Dear Sir or Madame,

I'm very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

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________________________________________________________________________________

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Thank you very much.

Yours truly,

Li Ping

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madame,

I'm very glad to be invited to the English summer camp.

I prefer to go in July because I'll have to prepare myself for the new school term in August. It seems all the activities you offer are attractive and meaningful. But I'd like to attend the English lectures, from which I can get more information on British and American culture. With the development of economy and technology, more and more foreigners are eager to know about China. So I hope to teach foreigners Chinese and spread Chinese culture.

It's been a dream for me to visit Beijing. Could you organize a tour around the city during the camp?

Thank you very much.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是写一封信，假设你是李平，最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动，现就有关事项征求你的意见。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系。灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

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