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短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
When I first learned to write in English,I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.


When I first learned to write in English,I into many difficulties. The main problem was in(in去掉)that I always thought in Chinese tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her .Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy to myself on paper as I was learning to express in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed it my teacher. She liked it much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was good one. I was encouraged by their words.

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第Ⅱ卷(共35分)
第四部分:写作(共两节,满分35分)
第一节:短文改错(共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一个行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画—个勾(√);如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
该行多一个词:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
该行缺一个词:在缺词处加—个漏字符号(∧),在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词:在错的词下面划一横线,在该行右边的横线上写出改正后的词。
注意:原行没有错误的不要改。
Last week, when I was taking train in Manchester, I saw a           76._______
scene it astonished me. On the platform I noticed a woman  in       77.__    _
worn clothes walking slowly. Suddenly, he fell to the ground.          78._______
There I see other people just keep walking as if                     79._______
something happened. For a moment the woman’s eyes were           80._______
full of hopelessness. Then she struggled to her foot and got on          81._______
a train. I just wondered why others didn’t try to help with this            82._______
woman. Later I talked about this event to my friend, who looked       83._______
at me and said, “What else did you do at that time? Just looking?”       84._______
I looked at him in silence. I realized I was just so selfish as others      85._______
on the scene, too.

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