短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词.2. 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Cathy,

I am writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can’t afford famous brands.

I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money for you to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.

What’s more, beauty is only skin-deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win others’ respect.

As the saying goes, never judge the person by his appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.

Yours,

Jane

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Eating too much fatty food, exercising too little and smoking can raise your future risk of heart disease．But there is another factor that can cause your heart problems more immediately: the air you breathe.

Previous studies have linked high exposure (暴露）to environmental pollution to an increased risk of heart problem, but two analyses(分析) now show that poor air quality can lead to heart attack or stroke (中风）within as little as a few hours after exposure．In one review of the research, scientists found that people exposed to high levels of pollutants (污染物）were up to 5% more likely（可能的） to suffer a heart attack within days of exposure than those with lower exposure．A separate study of stroke patients showed that even air that the U．S．Environmental Protection Agency (EPA) considers to be of “moderate” (良好）quality and relatively safe for our health can raise the risk of stroke as much as 34% within 12 to 14 hours of exposure.

The authors of both studies stress（强调）that these risks are relatively（相对的）small for healthy people and certainly modest compared with other risk factors such as smoking and high blood pressure．However, it is important to be aware of these dangers because everyone is exposed to air pollution regardless of lifestyle choices．So stricter regulation（规章制度）by the EPA of pollutants may not only improve environmental air quality but could also become necessary to protect public health.

1.The text mainly discusses the relationship between _______.

A．heart problems and air quality

B．heart problems and exercising

C．heart problems and smoking

D．heart problems and fatty food

2.The underlined word “modest” in Paragraph 3 most probably means_________ .

A．relatively high

B．extremely（极大地）low

C．relatively low

D．extremely high

3.What can we learn from the text?

A．Eating fatty food has immediate effects on your heart

B．The EPA conducted many studies on air quality

C．Moderate air quality is more harmful than smoking

D．Stricter regulations on pollutants should be made.

4.The author's purpose of writing the text is most likely to________

A．inform

B．persuade（说服）

C．describe

D．entertain（娱乐）

完成句子

请根据单词的首字母或括号里的提示完成下列句子，每空只填一个单词。

1.She was rewarded for her 40 years’ f_________ service with the company.

2.The way in which we work has undergone a complete _________ (a total change in something, a revolution)in the past decade.

3.He strongly believes that there must be a physical explanation for these strange _________(现象).

4.My eyes slowly grew _________(familiar with something and accepting it as normal or usual) to the dark.

5.The police said that the accident deserved further investigation as the c_________ surrounding it were incredibly strange.

6.There is w__________ and growing acceptance that women should be equal to men at work.

7.We cannot _________ (to promise something will happen) our flights will never be delayed.

8.Our research attempts to ________ (assess) the effectiveness of the different drugs.

9.As a patriot, she is bitterly o_________ to the idea of moving abroad.

10.It was so _________(令人难为情) having to sing in public.

11.The prisoners made an a_________ to escape, but failed.

12.There is convincing _________(证据) of a link between exposure to sun and skin cancer.

13.Our school is e_________ with some teaching facilities.

14.She made an _________(预约) for her son to see the doctor.

15.Her position in the party has _________(to become stronger) in recent weeks.

16.Nowadays many companies adopt the approach of f_________ working hours so that the workers can manage their own time more effectively.

17.Colors like red c_________ a sense of energy and strength.

18.They are trying to keep the costs to a _________(最低限度).

19.Breathing is an _________ (done or happening without thinking) function of the body.

20.It was a c_________ that he was born on his mother’s birthday.

--- How did you _________ the company?

--- It used to be _________ my father. He gave it to me after his retirement.

A. take possession of; in possession of

B. take the possession of; in the possession of

C. take possession of; in the possession of

D. take the possession of; in possession of

It is all very well to blame traffic jams, the cost of petrol and the quick pace of modern life, but manners on the roads are becoming horrible. Everybody knows that the nicest men become monsters behind the wheel. It is very well, again, to have a tiger in the tank, but to have one in the driver’s seat is another matter altogether. You might tolerate the odd road-hog, the rude and inconsiderate driver, but nowadays the well-mannered motorist is the exception to the rule. Perhaps the situation calls for a “Be Kind to Other Drivers” campaign, otherwise it may get completely out of control.

Road politeness is not only good manners, but good sense too. It takes the most cool-headed and good-tempered drivers to resist the temptation to revenge when subjected to uncivilized behavior. On the other hand, a little politeness goes a long way towards relieving the tensions of motoring. A friendly nod or a wave of acknowledgement in response to an act of politeness helps to create an atmosphere of goodwill and tolerance so necessary in modern traffic conditions. But such acknowledgements of politeness are all too rare today. Many drivers nowadays don’t even seem able to recognize politeness when they see it.

However, misplaced politeness can also be dangerous. Typical examples are the driver who brakes violently to allow a car to emerge from a side street at some hazard to following traffic, when a few seconds later the road would be clear anyway; or the man who waves a child across a zebra crossing into the path of oncoming vehicles that may be unable to stop in time. The same goes for encouraging old ladies to cross the road wherever and whenever they want to. It always amazes me that the highways are not covered with the dead bodies of these grannies.

A veteran (资深的) driver, whose manners are faultless, told me it would help if motorists learnt to filter correctly into traffic streams one at a time without causing the total blockages that give rise to bad temper. Unfortunately, modern motorists can’t even learn to drive, let alone master the subtler aspects of boatmanship. Years ago the experts warned us that the car-ownership explosion would demand a lot more give-and-take from all road users. It is high time for all of us to take this message to heart.

1.According to this passage, troubles on the road are primarily caused by ________.

A. people’s attitude towards the road-hog

B. the rhythm of modern life

C. the behavior of the driver

D. traffic conditions

2.The sentence “You might tolerate the odd road-hog... the rule.” (Para. 1) implies that ________.

A our society is unjust towards well-mannered motorists

B. rude drivers can be met only occasionally

C. the well-mannered motorist cannot tolerate the road-hog

D. nowadays impolite drivers make up the majority of motorists

3.In the writer’s opinion, which is “misplaced politeness”?

A. Revenge when subjected to uncivilized behavior.

B. Encouraging old ladies to cross the road as long as they want to.

C. A wave of acknowledgement in response to an act of politeness.

D. Waving a child across a zebra crossing.

4.In the writer’s opinion, ________.

A. strict traffic regulations are badly needed

B. drivers should apply road politeness properly

C. rude drivers should be punished

D. drivers should avoid traffic jams

New York----Michelle Obama made a daring decision to return to the same designer who created her Inaugural (就职）Ball dress four years ago -- and the risk paid off.

The First Lady looked extremely attractive in a thin, sweeping, and ruby-colored dress by designer Jason Wu. She teamed the dramatic dress with heels by Jimmy Choo and a diamond ring by Kimberly McDonald.

She surprised the fashion establishment by returning to a Wu design which had been the custom made for her.

Four years ago at her first Inauguration Ball, Michelle shimmered（熠熠生辉）in an off-white, one-shouldered floor-length dress by the designer.

Wu, who was 26 at the time and had only been working in fashion for three years, saw his career take off after the First Lady's surprise decision to wear one of his dresses.

He said at the time that he was unaware she had chosen the dress and had been watching at home on his couch and eating pizza when she appeared.

After her 2013 decision, Wu told Women's Wear Daily: “Mrs Obama likes to keep her secrets. She fooled me again.”

Wu released a women's clothing and accessories（装饰品）collection at Target last year and continues to be popular with the First Lady for official engagements.

The sleeveless, cross-halter neck dress with low-cut back flattered（突出）49-year-old Michelle's arms and neat waist.

It had been created especially for her by Wu and was a departure from the dark and plain colour tone she stuck to at earlier inauguration events.

Mrs Obama's new hairstyle -- she had bangs（美发沙龙）cut on her birthday last week had been loosely tousled（蓬松的）for the special night.

Vice-President Joe Biden's wife Jill also looked attractive in a blue silk dress by Vera Wang at the Inauguration Ball.

1.What does the passage mainly talk about？

A. Designer Wu’s great works

B. Mrs. Obama’s decision to return to her former fashion designer

C. The First Lady’s secrets.

D. Wu, a great designer.

2.Michelle Obama’s brave decision proved to be a_________.

A. risk B. danger C. Surprise D. success

3.According to the passage, which of the following is correct?

A. Mrs Obama’s inaugural dresses were made by the same designer.

B. Joe Biden’s wife Jill also had her dress created by Wu.

C. The colour tone at Michelle’s earlier inaugural events was not satisfactory.

D. Mrs Obama had straight forehead hair as her new hairstyle for the special night.

4.Which of the following best describes Jason Wu?

A. Daring and gifted. B. Unusual and cautious.

C. Careful and brave. D. Talented and lucky.

Bruce Jun Fan Lee was born in the hour of the Dragon, between 6 and 8 a.m., in the “Year of the Dragon” on November 27, 1940 at the Jackson Street Hospital in San Francisco’s Chinatown. Today, a plaque (牌匾) in the hospital’s entry remembers the place of his birth. Bruce’s birth, in the hour and the year of Dragon, is a powerful symbol in Chinese astrology (星相学). It would be a strong indication of the powerful life that was to be lived by Bruce Lee and the explosive influence his life would have on countless others.

At the age of three months, Lee Hoi Chuen, his wife Grace and baby Bruce returned to Hong Kong where Bruce would be raised until the age of 18. Probably because of the long ocean voyage and the change in climates, Bruce was not a strong child in his very early years, a condition that would change when he took up the study of kung fu at the age of 13.

At the age of 13, Bruce was introduced to Master Yip Man, a teacher of the Wing Chun style of kung fu. For five years Bruce studied diligently and became very proficient. Regarding Yip Man as a master teacher and wise man, Bruce respected him greatly and frequently visited with him in later years. When he first took up kung fu, he used his new skills to fight his “enemies”, but it did not take long for Bruce to learn that the real value of martial arts training is that the skills of physical combat (搏斗) build up confidence to the point that one does not feel the constant need to defend one’s honor through fighting.

In high school, Bruce, now no longer a weak child, was beginning to improve his body through hard training. One of his accomplishments was winning an interschool Boxing Championship against an English student. Given the graceful movements, which would later be spectacularly displayed in his films, it is no surprise that Bruce was also an excellent dancer, and in 1958 he won the Hong Kong Cha Cha Championship.

At the age of 18, Bruce was looking for new prospect in his life, as were his parents who were discouraged that Bruce had not made much progress academically. His family decided that it was time for him to return to the land of his birth and find his future there. In April of 1959, with $100 in his pocket, Bruce boarded a steamship and began his voyage to San Francisco.

1.The plaque at the entrance of the Jackson Street Hospital is considered as ________.

A. an obvious sign of Bruce’s powerful life

B. a strong influence of Bruce’s life on others

C. a reminder of Bruce Lee’s birthplace

D. a powerful symbol in Chinese astrology

2.Bruce didn’t have a strong body until ________.

A. he practiced boxing in high school

B. he took up kung fu with Master Yip Man

C. he won a dancing championship

D. he returned to the land of his birth

3.Learning kung fu diligently from Master Yip Man, Bruce soon realized that ________.

A. one can’t master kung fu skills without much practice

B. only through physical combat can one defend his honor

C. one can never defeat himself unless trained by a master

D. excellent kung fu skills can strengthen one’s confidence considerably

4.It can be inferred from the passage that ________.

A. Bruce didn’t have outstanding academic achievements in school

B. Master Yip Man offered to teach Bruce Chinese kung fu for free

C. Bruce’s parents sent him back to San Francisco for better education

D. Bruce made a big fortune by participating in boxing competitions

完形填空

阅读下面短文，从短文后各题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项，并在答题卡上将该项涂黑。

John was 20 years old. He was a handsome and gifted ________ . But he stopped talking as much as he usually did after he graduated from high school. This year, his________ reduced to nothing. His parents knew he was ________ , and continually told him that they loved him. Everyone was ________ about his well-being and wondered what they could say or do to help him, since saying “I love you” ________ wasn’t enough to improve his situation.

John finally made a(an) ________ . He locked himself in the cellar(地下室)and stayed there for three days without food. ________ he continued to acknowledge his parents’ love for him and his love for them, his depression ________ . His loved ones were ________ that he would even kill himself one day. Healthcare professionals were ________ ,

but the advice, care and kindness did not ________ . On the fourth day of John’s isolation(隔离), the local high school football ________ , who didn’t’ know John’s situation, happened to call him. John’s mother told him John was not ________ and took a message at the coach’s ________ . Then she went to the cellar door and called down the stairs, “John, Coach Ivers just phoned. He said that his players ________last night on who they wanted as their assistant coach. They said you were the greatest football athlete they had ever had and they though they could ________ the state championship if you helped to coach them. Coach Ivers said they need you! He said if you are interested, you should be at the football practice ________at 14:45 this afternoon.” Hearing the message, John eventually came out of the cellar. He accepted the coaching job. ________ the time he came home from his first ________ , he had walked out of his depression. He once again found the great feeling of being ________ , and he was back to his old self.

1.A. judge B. athlete C. captain D. professor

2.A. promise B. complaint C. motivation D. conversation

3.A. depressed B. awkward C. innocent D. unconscious

4.A. curious B. positive C. frightened D. concerned

5.A. directly B. properly C. obviously D. specially

6.A. move B. apology C. difference D. deal

7.A. Because B. Although C. Unless D. When

8.A. acquired B. recovered C. deepened D. withdrew

9.A. amazed B. confused C. bored D. convinced

10.A. taken in B. brought in C. turned in D. put in

11.A. solve B. produce C. work D. develop

12.A. assistant B. manager C. coach D. guider

13.A. occupied B. suitable C. flexible D. available

14.A. request B. recommendation C. invitation D. compromise

15.A. competed B. voted C. connected D. responded

16.A. obtain B. recognize C. approve D. admit

17.A. in person B. with delight C. by chance D. on purpose

18.A. During B. Before C. By D. After

19.A. appointment B. practice C. experience D. preparation

20.A. demanded B. respected C. protected D. needed

Recently a survey _________ prices of the same goods in two different supermarkets has caused heated debate among citizens.

A. compared B. comparing C. compares D. being compared

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