Question

【题目】假定你是李华，是一名中学生。在一位名叫worried的学生的博客上，你看到如下内容：

I am a high school student in Grade 3. My parents always expect me to be admitted into a famous university, which makes me very sad. Though I work hard, I find it difficult to live up to their expectations. What shall I do?

请根据以上博客的内容，回复这位学生。要点如下：

1. 表示同情；2. 陈述自己的看法；3. 提出几点建议。

注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数；

Dear Worried,

I am Li Hua, a seventeen-year-old high school student.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Worried,

I am Li Hua, a seventeen-year-old high school student. I know from your blog you’re upset these days, because your parents expect you to be admitted into a famous university. I’m writing to offer you some advice.

A lot of parents want their children to stand out in their dreams, so many of us live under pressure. Actually if we try our best and work harder, we can make greater progress in our lessons and do better in the exam. It doesn’t matter whether we enter a famous university.

I advise you to concentrate on your lessons. Don’t care too much about what others say. Besides, you should believe in yourself. I’m sure you can go to a famous university if you try your best. Finally, why not talk with your parents, making them aware of how you are feeling?

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文，同时也属于应用文中的写博客。使用第一人称和一般现在时为主。要点：1. 表示同情；2. 陈述自己的看法；3. 提出几点建议。提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体。同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点。

【范文亮点】：本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，如Besides ，Finally；另外高级句式的使用也较多，如. It doesn’t matter whether we enter a famous university. 中的主语从句。Finally, why not talk with your parents, making them aware of how you are feeling?.中的现在分词表主动用法等。