假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均限一题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
At present，I am extremely happy because I am doing all what I like．As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it to the full．It feels well to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams．When I was recalled the happy things which happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all．It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties．So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoped to lighten my parents financial burden．After making tons of painstaking efforts，I succeeded．On the ceremony，my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman，and with the brightest smile on her face．

分析本文主要讲述作者因为能做自己喜欢做的事情很高兴．作为一名高三学生，每天努力学习，生活过得很充实．作者家庭有段时间经济困难，为了减轻家庭负担，作者下定决心努力学习要赢得奖学金．最终，作者成功了．

解答 At present，I am extremely happy because I am doing all what I like．As a senior three student，I study hard every day and live it to the full．It feels well to study hard with my determining classmates to fulfill our dreams．When I was recalled the happy things which happened to me，the experience of my receiving the scholarship in middle school topped it all．It was a time when my family is going through financial difficulties．So I made up my mind to win the scholarship，hoped to lighten my parents financial burden．After making tons of painstaking efforts，I succeeded．On the ceremony，my mom was the most poorly-dressed woman，and with the brightest smile on her face．
详解：
1．what改为that或去掉all 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词all在从句中作like的宾语，只能用关系代词that；或去掉all，what作like的宾语，同时引导宾语从句．
2．well改为good 考查形容词．feel是连系动词，后接形容词作表语．
3．determining改为determined 考查过去分词．现在分词转换的形容词常常修饰事物，过去分词转换的形容词常常修饰人或者与人有关的事物．
4．去掉was 考查动词语态．I与recall之间是主谓关系，用一般过去时的主动语态．
5．it改为them 考查代词．them指代文中提到的the happy things．
6．is改为was 考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．hoped改为hoping 考查现在分词．I与hope之间是主谓关系，用现在分词作状语．
8．parents改为parents'考查名词所有格．burden是名词，其前用所有格修饰作定语．
9．burden改为burdens 考查名词复数．burden是可数名词，根据上下文语境要用复数形式．
10．and改为but 考查连词．the most poorly-dressed woman和with the brightest smile on her face之间是转折关系而非并列关系，用连词but．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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17．Louis Armstrong was one of the mostinfluential（influence） artists in the history of music．

14．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My hometown is a mountain village．The trees there were very green but the water is quite clean．I can even clearly see the fish to swim in the mountain streams．When the night come，the air is much cool than that in the daytime．People like to walk out their homes and have a get-together．I often run along the village happy．Unlike big cities，there the air is polluted and the buildings are high，my village is quite different．The star hang in the sky．When I look at theirs，they are so close to me．It seems as if I could touch them．The night here is so wonderful．

1．One of the most popular vacation destinations for young families is the home of relatives．（36）F Here are some tips for making sure you are invited back again．
Be considerate
Every family has their own way of doing things．Keep these things in mind when you're visiting．
If your host family are early to bed and early to rise，don't keep them up talking until one o'clock in the morning．
If your host family gets angry about kids running wild，either plan to keep a close eye on your kids or plan to stay somewhere else．（37）G
Offer to help out
Playing host to a family with children can be quite a challenge．Make sure you help lighten the load．
（38）A Offer to help with cooking and cleanup．Make your beds and run to the store for milk．Better yet，don't ask．Just start working．
Help pay for food
This may not apply，if you're visiting parents and they insist on paying for everything and they can afford it．（39）D Use your udgment when it comes to parents．However，if you're visiting cousins，it will be a great help to them if you buy your share of the food．
Show your appreciation
No matter whom you are visiting，make sure you let them know you appreciate their hospitality（盛情招待）．（40）B Or leave some fresh flowers when you leave．If you don't have enough money，write them a letter，letting them know how much fun you had and how much you appreciate them．

A．Don't expect your hosts to supply your every need．
B．Offer to take them out to dinner on your last night in town．
C．Make sure you don't leave your things behind while visiting a family．
D．In that case you may hurt your parents if you insist on paying for food．
E．Try not to disturb someone who is in the middle of exams．
F．Staying with relatives is a great way to save money while getting away from home for a while．
G．Having a talk with your children about expected behavior while visiting is always a good idea．

11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处；每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Our life journey can't always be smoothly．We are bound to meet with difficulties．Last year，I moved to a different city with my parents．Top student as I had been ago，I always fall behind my new classmates however hard I tried．I was so upset that I nearly lost my heart．Fortunately，my friend Xiao Ming noticed my discouragement but encouraged me not give up．Inspiring by him，I gradually cheered up and began to make progresses．I was very grateful for him．It was his help which made me a confident and successful student again．

18．At the beginning of each term，our school usually holds an opening ceremonyin the sports ground．

How to be a teenage role model

In today’s world, most teen role models(楷模)are famous people. They appeal to the teenagers a lot with their looks, money and fame. 1. If you are a teen out there and you want to inspire your peers(同龄人), here are a few steps that you should follow:

Build confidence.

People always believe in those who believe in themselves.2. Build on these strengths and let them help you to develop into the kind of role model you want to be.

Having a unique character can really draw others to you more than being the same as others. This does not mean that you should give up the same interests you have with your friends, but just try to be a leader rather than a follower of others.

Be humble.

4. Many people respect those who have accomplished a lot in their lives but are still down to earth. Remember just because you have found your confidence doesn’t mean you should look down upon others.

Play the role you have created for yourself.

After you have gotten a positive image(形象) of yourself and a good relationship with your peers, stick to it! Be guided by your desire(欲望) to be a role model in everything you do.5.

Having mastered the above steps, you will start noticing the positive influence you are having on others. Keep trying to better yourself as you continue to inspire others.

A. Develop your own style.

B. Choose your own role model.

C. There is nothing as golden as being humble(谦逊的).

D. Let your entire life be inspirational to others.

E. So build faith in yourself by getting to know your strengths.

F. You should overcome your weaknesses.

G. However, anybody can be a teenage role model if they put their mind to it.

Pass Your Love On

Waiting for the airplane to take off, I was happy to get a seat by myself. Just then, an air hostess approached me and asked, " Would you mind ______ your seat? A couple would like to sit together." The only ______ seat was next to a girl with her arms in casts (石膏绷带), a black-and-blue face, and a sad expression. “ ______ am I going to sit there,” I thought immediately. But a soft voice spoke,“She needs help.” Finally, I ______ to move to that seat.

The girl was named Kathy. She ______ hurt in a car accident and now was on her way for ______ .

When the snack and juice arrived, it did not take me long to ______ that Kathy would not be able to ______ herself. I considered ______ to feed her but hesitated, as it seemed too ______ to offer a service to a ______ . But then I realized that Kathy's need was more ______ than my discomfort. I offered to help her eat, and ______ she was uncomfortable to accept, she ______ as I expected. We became closer and closer in a short period of time. By the end of the five-hour trip, my heart ______ , and the ______ was really better spent than if I had just sat by myself.

I was very glad I had reached ______ my comfort zone to sit next to Kathy and feed her. Love ______ flows beyond human borders and removes the fears that keep us ______ . When we ______ to serve another, we grow to live in a larger and more rewarding world.

1.A. losing B. changing C. taking D. giving

2.A. comfortable B. suitable C. available D. favorable

3.A. No problem B. No way C. Nowhere D. No doubt

4.A. decided B. wanted C. regretted D. promised

5.A. has been B. would be C. used to be D. had been

6.A. treatment B. travel C. pleasure D. business

7.A. know B. say C. realize D. recognize

8.A. eat B. feed C. choose D. support

9.A. offering B. needing C. stopping D. trying

10.A. impolite B. far C. close D. fast

11.A. girl B. neighbor C. passenger D. stranger

12.A. unusual B. direct C. important D. shameful

13.A. when B. although C. since D. as

14.A. refused B. wondered C. cried D. did

15.A. had warmed B. had jumped C. had broken D. had cheered

16.A. life B. money C. time D. energy

17.A. below B. through C. across D. beyond

18.A. seldom B. never C. hardly D. sometimes

19.A. separate B. independent C. silent D. upset

20.A. happen B. stretch C. wait D. continue

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