Question

【题目】高中毕业临近，高三年级同学想给学校送一件礼物，以表达你们对学校培养和教育的感激之情。请你以学生会的名义向高三同学用英语写一份倡议书，倡导学生种植一棵纪念树。主要内容如下：

1. 你的建议；

2. 说明这样做的意义；

3. 提出倡议。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 倡议书的开头和结尾已为你写好。

Hello, every Senior Three student,

We are going to graduate from our school soon.

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Student Union

Answer 1

【答案】Hello, every Senior Three student,

We are going to graduate from our school soon. We have studied here for three years and we all regard it as our second home. We have planned to deliver a gift to our school. What about planting some trees?

Based on what we all know, trees can clean the air, which absorb carbon dioxide and give out oxygen, and made our school more beautiful. Years later, when we come back to visit our school, the trees we are going to plant will grow up and remind us of the time when we studied in school.

So we think trees are the best gifts not only for our school but also for us. Let’s start now!

Student Union

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一份倡议书。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一份倡议书：高中毕业临近,高三年级同学想给学校送一件礼物,以表达你们对学校培养和教育的感 激之情。请你以学生会的名义向高三同学用英语写一份倡议书,倡导学生种植一棵纪念树。 主要内容如下:1 .你的建议；2.说明这样做的意义；3.提出倡议。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：granuate from our school（从我们学校毕业）；What about planting some trees?（觉得种树怎么样）；Based on what we all know（以我们都知道的为基础）；remind us of the time（提醒我们时间）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。