题目内容
【题目】情景作文
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图先后顺序,介绍在“国画之旅”活动中,向国画艺术家学习国画的过程,并以“A Day with an Artist of Traditional Chinese Painting”为题,给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件。
注意:词数不少于60
提示词: 国画traditional Chinese painting
荷花lotus
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【答案】
Last Friday, our class invited a well-known artist to teach us how to draw a lotus in Chinese painting.
As soon as the artist came into the classroom, he was given warm welcome which made him so happy. All of us wore big smiles. First, he showed us some skills of drawing a lotus. We watched him carefully around him. Then each of us made an attempt to do it by ourselves under the careful instruction of him. Finally, because of my excellent performance, I was awarded “Outstanding Young Artist”. Looking at the award, I felt very excited.
Through this experience, we are all amazed at Chinese painting and proud of being Chinese. We hope we can have more activities of this kind in the future!
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇看图写作,一共四幅图。做题时:1. 认真读图,可知四幅图讲述的是你目前的学习和生活情况以及毕业后的打算,2. 初步构思,考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句,然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核,修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来,看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息,还有参考词汇都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后,应在内心构思一个基本的框架,并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型,以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时,要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句,不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象,更使上下文更为紧凑、自然
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语made an attempt to do尝试做某事;because of因为;Looking at the award, I felt very excited.这个句子运用到非谓语动词的用法;We hope we can have more activities of this kind in the future!这个句子运用到宾语从句;