假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划-横线.并在该下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改．
         增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
         修改：在错的词下划-横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词．
         注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
My friend Nick told me story about his experience back in the US．which was
very interested．One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door
come by to help．As the old man looked over the things on the yard that were to be
sold he stopped at a box of golden ball for Christmas trees．On the box was a card
Say："25 cents each..""You will never sell these for that much．"he told Nick．
Convinced，Nick has brought the price up to 10 cents a piece．Without a moment's
delay，my neighbor pricked up the box but announceed："I'll take the m．"

分析文章大意：本文主要叙述了我的朋友跟我讲了他在美国过程中的有趣经历．

解答 My friend Nick told me∧story about his experience back in the US．which was
                                    a
veryinterested．One day he was having a yard sale and the old man living next door
     interesting
comeby to help．As the old man looked over the thingsonthe yardthat were to be
came                                                                         in 或   ground
sold he stopped at a box of goldenballfor Christmas trees．On the box was a card
                                                 balls
Say："25 cents each..""You will never sell these for that much．"he told Nick．
Saying
Convinced，Nick has brought the price upto 10 cents a piece．Without a moment's
                                                         down
delay，myneighbor pricked up the box but announceed："I'll take the m．"
           his
1．story前加不定冠词a   考查冠词．因为单数可数名词一般不单独使用，表示一个，故加a．
2．that-which    考查定语从句的关系词．此处是非限制性定语从句，故that改为which．
3．interested-interesting  考查形容词．     从句的主语是which，应用interesting"令人感兴趣的"作表语．
4．come-came  考查时态．   整篇文章都用的是过去时，故come改为came．
5．on-in 或yard-ground   考查介词搭配．
6．ball-balls，考查名词单复数． a box of+可数名词复数形式，故ball改为balls．
7．say-saying，考查非谓语动词．     saying作定语，修饰card．
8．up-down  考查副词．根据上下文，此处应是降价，故up改为down．
9．my-his   考查人称代词．根据前文此处应是his．
10．but-and 考查连词．   but前后的动词是并列关系，故but改为and．

点评本篇短文改错考查冠词，非谓语动词，名词单复数，时态等，平时注重多积累，答题时结合句意和语法进行分析，答完后通读，是否通顺，符合逻辑．

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提示：

1．人物介绍；

2．推荐理由（学习、品质、班级工作等）；

3．你的愿望。

注意：

1．词数100左右；

2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：雾霾haze 维生素vitamin

Dear Peter,

How is it going?________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________________________________________

______________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

We all do it. We make huge plans for New Year's Eve. As the big day approaches, we start building expectations, planning the best night of our lives. And yet, it rarely lives up. After all, how could it? We set unrealistic goals for a single night when many places are crowded and loud, there are tons of noisy drunk people, and an astronomical bill comes at the end of the evening. You're left wondering, "Was it worth it?" Fortunately, all it takes is a little reconsideration of your expectations to make sure this year's big night is one to remember.

If you get smashed on New Year's Eve, it is likely that you won't even remember what you did and whether or not you had fun. That's not saying there's something wrong with having a couple of glasses of wine at midnight. After all, it is a celebration. Just keep it light, since you want to remember the fun you had with your friends and family. After all, do you really want to spend the first day of the new year with drunkenness?

Many people like to spend the holidays with their friends and family. You could reserve a table at a favorite restaurant, but how about staying home and cooking? There's nothing worse than having to shout across the table because the restaurant is so crowded, except maybe waiting in line for an hour or more for that privilege. Never mind the bill will almost always be significantly higher than it would be almost any other night of the year. If you love to cook, you can make a great meal that everyone can enjoy.

A great idea for an at-home New Year's Eve party is wonderful. If it's a large get-together, it might be difficult to have a sit-down meal due to space restrictions, but a buffet is always a good choice. You just need to display the dishes for them to choose as they wish. Consider your space and guests' comfort when deciding what to serve.

1.Why do our huge plans for New Year's Eve usually fail?

A. We waste too much money on dinner.

B. There are drunken people everywhere.

C. Every place is crowded with people.

D. We pin too much on a single night.

2.Which of the following can replace the underlined word "smashed" in Paragraph 2?

A. Tired. B. Drunk.

C. Bored. D. Excited.

3.What did the author suggest doing to spend holidays with your friends and family?

A. Treating them at home.

B. Inviting them to dinner outside.

C. Waiting in line for a favorite restaurant.