题目内容
【题目】最近,由于很多不遵纪守礼的行为,而导致了一些恶劣事故,如:成都女司机由于不文明驾驶而遭致暴力殴打。假设你是李华,请以“遵纪守礼”为主题,写一篇英语短文,向你校校报投稿。内容包括:
(1)中国自古以来就是文明礼仪之邦。
(2)人人都该重礼仪、遵纪守礼。
(3)谈谈你认为中学生应该如何做到遵纪守礼。
注意: (1)词数:100左右。
(2)为使行文连贯,可适当增加细节。
(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:discipline (U) 纪律 civilized文明的
Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving.
【答案】
Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion, both beating others and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.
China is a civilized country with a long history. Our ancestors attached great importance to “Li”---civilized behavior. Every Chinese should obey discipline and behave well.
As middle school students, we should be strict with ourselves in manners. Firstly, we ought to respect the old and care the young. Besides, we should behave ourselves, such as civilizedly dinning, waiting in line on many occasions and so on. Last but not least, we must obey school and society discipline, not cheating in exams.
As far as I am concerned, only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious.
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息来介绍如何遵纪守礼。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如waiting in line on many occasions and so on. 是非谓语短语做状语。only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious. 使用了倒装句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语in my opinion,such as,last but not least,as far as I am concerned等。以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。