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【题目】最近,由于很多不遵纪守礼的行为,而导致了一些恶劣事故,如:成都女司机由于不文明驾驶而遭致暴力殴打。假设你是李华,请以遵纪守礼为主题,写一篇英语短文,向你校校报投稿。内容包括:

(1)中国自古以来就是文明礼仪之邦。

(2)人人都该重礼仪、遵纪守礼。

(3)谈谈你认为中学生应该如何做到遵纪守礼。

注意: (1)词数:100左右。

(2)为使行文连贯,可适当增加细节。

(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。

参考词汇:discipline (U) 纪律 civilized文明的

Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving.

【答案】

Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion, both beating others and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.

China is a civilized country with a long history. Our ancestors attached great importance to Li---civilized behavior. Every Chinese should obey discipline and behave well.

As middle school students, we should be strict with ourselves in manners. Firstly, we ought to respect the old and care the young. Besides, we should behave ourselves, such as civilizedly dinning, waiting in line on many occasions and so on. Last but not least, we must obey school and society discipline, not cheating in exams.

As far as I am concerned, only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious.

【解析】

试题分析:本篇书面表达属于说明文,根据提示信息来介绍如何遵纪守礼。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如waiting in line on many occasions and so on. 是非谓语短语做状语。only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious. 使用了倒装句。此外,文章还使用了大量短语in my opinion,such as,last but not least,as far as I am concerned等。以及副词besides的使用使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。

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【题目】I walked down the hall heading to see my 88-year-old grandma who had been in hospital. Each member of the family was taking turns sitting with her because of her dementia (痴呆). As I did I looked very carefully at some of the rooms on this wing of the hospital, and it seemed that almost every bed held an elderly person. Some appeared to be confused, and some just looked lonely. I couldn’t help but notice that there was no family there, no one to care them, and no one to reduce the ache of loneliness. My heart broke inside me.

They are aging, with withered (萎缩的) skin on their faces and hands, their eyes look tried, and yet no one notices them. Could it be that we are far too busy to slow down and give a moment of our time to anyone that may swerve (使突然转向) us off the course we are traveling on? Are we afraid of those who have come before us to pave the way, afraid that they carry some awful disease that if we get too close we might catch it?

Whatever the case may be, one day we will be those same people that we long to avoid. We pay thousands of dollars for staying young, and we may turn up the music to forget the thoughts of getting older. But, try as we might, time and age will catch up with us.

We seem to have come to detest (嫌恶) the elderly. While we once held them in high regard and honor, always enjoying their stories of history, we now see them as a pain, always in our way. Isn’t it time we wake up?

So, next time you see a withered hand extended in need, or peer into the eyes of a lonely aging face, don’t run or look away. Remember, it might just be you in that place one day.

【1】What made the author deeply sad?

A. The poor food for the patients.

B. The sight he saw in the hospital.

C. The hopeless patients in the hospital.

D. The bad service of the hospital.

2What’s people’s excuse for not visiting the old?

A. They are too busy.

B. They can’t afford it.

C. They live too far away.

D. They usually travel abroad.

3What can we learn from the passage?

A. Time will tell the truth.

B. People are afraid of being old.

C. A doctor is important to old people.

D. Respecting elderly people is a good tradition.

4What does the author advise us to do in the last paragraph?

A. Respect the old.

B. Get along well with the old.

C. Help and pay attention to the old.

D. Spend more time with our parents.

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