Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你所在的学校要征集一封英文感谢信，以致意奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员，请你根据下列要点写一封信用于投稿。

1. 表达谢意； 2. 个人感受； 3. 表达信心。

注意：1.词数120左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。

参考词汇：流行病epidemic 疫情 epidemic situation 新型冠状病毒 novel corona virus

Dear Medical workers，

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Medical workers,

I am Li Hua from ZZFL school. On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you all for your devotion and sacrifice in the battle against the novel corona virus.

In this epidemic, it is you who, regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection, desperately rescue those infected but struggling for life. It is also you who have shed new light on the virus with expertise to build up our confidence to defeat it. It is you who deserve all admiration and love!

Such few words can't fully convey our thankfulness for your irreplaceable contribution. I believe with our joint efforts China will win the battle and make a quick recovery.

Good luck and stay well!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生写一封邮件，感谢奋战在抗击新型冠状病毒肺炎第一线的医护人员。

第一步：审题

体裁：应用文

时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。

结构：总分法

总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。

要求：1.表达感谢

2.个人感受

1）无私的精神。（selfless spirit）

2）增强我们的打败这个流行病的信心。（build up our confidence to defeat the epidemic）

3) 崇拜他们。（admire them）

3. 表达信心。(win the battle and make a quick recovery)

第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）

On behalf of; devotion and sacrifice; regardless of; the shortage of; desperately; struggling for; shed light on; build up; deserve; convey; irreplaceable contribution; joint efforts.

第三步：连词成句

1. On behalf of my school, I would like to express sincere gratitude to you for your devotion and sacrifice.

2. regardless of the shortage of equipment and the potential of infection

3. You have shed new light on the virus.

4. You build up our confidence to defeat it.

5. You deserve all admiration and love.

6. Such few words can't fully convey our thankfulness for your irreplaceable contribution.

根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）

1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，

第五步：润色修改