假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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13．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you how we students use computers on our daily life．First，some students surf online while doing their homework，what makes them not concentrate their efforts on our studies．Second，some use computers to get bad informations such as violence．Third，computer games destroy many students because they throw themselves into a virtual world，complete forgetting that they've got to do．Fourth，a large number of students absorbed in online shopping and watching movies and they keep think of the various goods and the exciting plots even when they're having classes!So I suggest that we used computers in a right，healthy way，and for a proper period of time while at the home．
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析文章是一封书信，讲述了学生上网的问题．学生上网会让他们无法集中精力在学习上，网络有一些暴力信息，电脑游戏也会让他们沉迷虚拟世界等等．作者建议学生要正确使用电脑．

解答 Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you how we students use computers on our daily life．
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First，some students surf online while doing their homework，what makes
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them not concentrate their efforts on our studies．
                                                      their
Second，some use computers to get bad informations such as violence．
                                                           information
Third，computer games destroy many students because they throw themselves

into a virtual world，complete forgetting that they've got to do．
                               completely             what
Fourth，a large number of students∧absorbed in online shopping and
                                                  加are
watching movies and they keep think of the various goods and the exciting plots
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even when they're having classes!So I suggest that we used computers in a right，
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healthy way，and for a proper period of time while at the home．
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Yours，
Li Hua．
1．on改为in．短语搭配，in our daily life在我们日常生活中．
2．what改为which．题干是非限制性定语从句，修饰前面的句子内容，要用which来引导．
3．our改为their．逻辑指代错误，句意表达的是他们没办法集中精力在学习上．
4．informations改为information．information是不可数名词，不能用复数．
5．complete改为completely．修饰动词要用副词．
6．that改为what．题干中they've got to do位于动词forgetting后，是一个宾语从句，从句中do缺少宾语，要用连接代词what．
7．加are．句意表示的是被动关系，要用be加过去分词来构成，文章讲述的是一般情况，所以be要用一般现在时态are．
8．think改为thinking．短语搭配，keep doing sth持续不断做某事．
9．used改为use．题干是suggest构成的宾语从句，从句要用should加动词原形，should可以省略．
10．去掉the．短语搭配，at home在家．

点评短文改错题考查的是语境理解能力和用法基础知识．常考的知识点有：名词（单复数错误），动词（时态，语态，搭配，转换），代词（指代错误），形容词和副词（转换，比较等级），连词（and，but，or）等．偶尔也会考查逻辑错误，如本来用her，却用了his等等．解题是要注意：以句子为单位，以动词为中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的错误；找错误要以动词为主，动词或与动词有关的错误占了改错的题的重要一部分．

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4．Here is some information for you if you want to make a visit to Xi'an．

Admission Fee：	CNY150 （March 1-end of November） CNY120 （December 1-end of February） The fare is for the Emperor Qin Shi Huang's Mausoleum Site Park Through Ticket including the Museum of Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses，Lishan Garden and shuttle buses inside the scenic area．
Guide Services：	The exhibits are so well explained in both Chinese and English．However，visitors can also enjoy the guide services．It costs around CNY 100to hire a guide．
Ticket Selling Hours：	Sell tickets from 08：30to 17：00 （March 16-Nov.15），stop check-in at 18：35； Sell tickets from 08：30to 16：30 （Nov.16-March 15），stop check-in at 18：05
Transportation：	From Xi'an Xianyang International Airport： Visitors can take Airport Shuttle Line 2to Xi'an Railway Station．The bus departs every hour fro 10：15to 19：15at 1F of T2and the ticket costs CNY 25．Visitors can also hire a taxi from the airport and the fare is about CNY 200． From downtown Xi'an： Take tourism bus No.306from the east square of Xi'an Railway Station or 307from the south gate of Tang Paradise．The whole journey takes about one hour．The bus fare is CNY7per person．
Getting Around：	Battery-powered motor vehicles and ancient-style carriages are available for visitors to tour around the mausoleum． 30free shuttle buses are traveling between the Qin Shi Huang Mausoleum and the Museum of Qin Terracotta Warriors and Horses for tourists'convenience．One can take them by showing the entrance ticket．
Recommended Time for a Visit：	The museum is crowded in the morning because there are too many group visitors．Therefore，independent visitors may visit the museum in the early afternoon to avoid the crowds．However，they should not miss the last bus that returns from the museum to Xi'an at 19：00．

60．A couple who want to visit the Museum in January should pay at leastC．
A．CNY 120
B．CNY 150
C．CNY 240
D．CNY 300
61．It can be learned from the passage thatB．
A．guide services are free of charge
B．there are more visitors in the morning
C．most guides speak in more than two languages
D．visitors can get around by free motor cars
62．Which of the following is True according to the passage？A
A．Visitors with through tickets can take free shuttle buses．
B．The last bus returns from the Museum at 18：30．
C．Visitors can enter the Museum with a ticket at any time．
D．Bus No.307starts from the east of Xi'an Railway Station．
63．The passage is written toB．
A．introduce the history of Xi'an
B．give some detailed information to visitors to Xi'an
C．recommend transportation to tour around Xi'an
D．offer the guide services in Xi'an（　　）

1．下面短文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Throughout history man has changed his physical environment in order to improving his way
of life．With the tools of technology that he has changed many physical feature of the earth．Thus，man's changes to the physical environment has not always had beneficial results．Today，pollution of the air and water is a increasing danger to the health of the planet．Like we know，massive destruction of environment has brought about positive effects on it and it even causes a great threat to man's existence．Therefore，effective measures should be take and laws passed to conserve environment．Otherwise，man will certain suffer from the serious consequences caused by this lack care for his living surroundings．

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误仅涉及一个单词的增加/删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧，并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用\划掉．
修改：在错词的下面画-横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
A book corner will be set up in our classroom．Our teacher calls on everyone donate a book．I support the decision because of books are the stairs leading to success．Read is of great help to us．The book corner helps broaden our horizon，and making our out-of-class activities more colorfully．
The book I donate is"How to Improve Your English Writing"，that can be beneficial to students who have troubles in writing English compositions．First，it introduces different types of English writing or some skills to write well．Besides，it provides many useful expressions and structures．Also，we can get good tips give by some experts．So I hope it can help my classmates about their English writing as well．

18．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Good morning，everyone．It's great honor for me to speak here．My name is Li Xiang，born in a harmonious family．My father and mother are all high school teachers．Influenced by them，I read widely during my early age，but I've developed a great interest in arts and sports．I'm easy-going，getting along well with my classmates．It is this personality which helps me win over the friendship of all my classmates，and also help me overcome many difficulties both in academic and personal life．Being admitted in your university has always been a beautiful dream for me．I dream constantly that I，along with mine classmates，will study happy with the help of the respectable professors．I dream that I will swim freely in the sea，enjoy the waves of knowledge．I hope all my dream will come true in the near future．Thank you．

4．Fear plays no part in this latest problem．"I'm not afraid I'll lose my children．I won't lose my children．We live together，and nothing，nothing，"she repeats，her voice rising when speaking to John's lawyer，"will stop me from being with my children．A law？Year，right．Don't disturb me when it comes to my children．You are never going to win．If John wants to see them，I cannot stop him．He's their father-I want them to see him!However，his visit in his present condition will disturb the children's stable （稳定的） life．"
   John，who has spent much of his time in California recently，has only hired a house for himself in Pennsylvania，according to his lawyer．"If he'd like to stick to a regular life，I'd be more than happy to do that，"Jane says．"The best thing for any child of a divorced （离婚的） parent is a stable life．I want nothing more than for him to set up a stable life for himself，so that he can be part of making our children's lives more stable．"
   While matters of money and care won't be settled for weeks，Jane hardly puts her life on．Last week the ABC network announced that Jane would return with her own show，Twist of Jane，in which she gives advice to other moms．Jane and her eight children will also return to ABC in a series  of  Jane Plus 8specials showing them on various adventures．It's a rest for Jane．who insists that she needs her new，busy life to provide for her family．"I have to lead such a life．and I'm thankful that I've built it to the top where now I can support my children．"she says．
   And  whether a bellicose（好斗的）dance judge or a bellicose former wife，Jane plans to keep  0n facing attacks on her．"Some people try to knock me down-only to make me more fierce，more protective，more determined to do better，"she says．"Go ahead，take me on．This will just make me stronger．"

57．According to Jane in the first paragraph，the lowA
A．can't take her children away from her
B．can't do anything with the case
C．will best settle the problem
D．will disturb her children
58．What does"to do that"refer to in the second paragraph？C
A．To live with John．
B．To hire a house for John．
C．To allow John to see the children
D．To ask John to set up a regular life．
59．What does the underlined sentence in the third paragraph mean？B
A．Jane's life is very difficult．
B．Jane continues to live as usual．
C．Jane almost can't control her lire
D．Jane works very hard to live a happy life．
60．Which word can best describe Jane？C
A．Proud．
B．Fierce．
C．Determined．
D．Independent．

2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
With the college entrance examination approaching，many students are so worried about it to fall asleep at night and even suffer from mentally illness．It's a fairly common phenomena among us students．Here is some effective methods for you to adopt．
First of all，you should spend a plenty of time prepare for the test．Secondly，it is no need to feel nervous when you have some bad emotions．I think take a deep breath is a helpful way to reduce your stress．Last but not least，you ought to believe yourself and keep a good state of mind．

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