题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华，你的英国好友Lucy来信问你计划在大学学什么专业。就此请你用英语写封回信，主要内容包括：
1.你的专业选择；
2.你选择该专业的理由；
3.为此你打算怎么做。
注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear Lucy,
I'm writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university.
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Best wishes.I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Lucy,
I'm writing to tell you about the major I will choose in the university.I have decided to major in computer science.There are some reasons why I made such a decision.Firstly,with the development of society,computers are playing an important role in many aspects of our life.Secondly,browsing the Internet is one of my hobbies,so I think I can study computer science well.Last but not least,being good at computer science may help me find a good job after graduating from college.
I know there is a long way to go before I enter a college.So now I must devote myself to study and try my best to get good grades in all subjects.If I can learn computer science as I wish, I will focus on it and study hard to develop some software.
Best wishes.I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇应用类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。所选专业，选这个专业的理由，为此打算怎么做，一个都不能缺。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。既然是书信，所以要注意格式和注意礼貌用语。该文写作的难点主要是如何更好的叙述这三点。因为所有考生的大致内容都是一样的，所以主要是看能不能写出让考官眼前一亮 的作文。同时要使文章的内容充实，不能显得无力。学生可以采用简单句和复杂句结合的方法，并且同时穿插一些祈使句和倒装句使文章充实。
【范文亮点】
本文书信格式正确，开篇先开门见山告知对方自己想学计算机专业，接着列出自己选这个专业的几点理由，最后交代了自己在大学里的打算并期望回信。文章内容详实，该有的要点很好的表达了，而且叙述的时候注意了逻辑连词的用法，上下文衔接自然，准确明了。
高级词汇和短语的运用:tell sb about sth告诉某人关于某事；play an important role in 在……中扮演重要角色；be good at 擅长；devote sb to sth某人投入到某事中去。等等。
全文句式多变，避免了句式单一。在叙述理由时用了firstly，secondly，last，这使文章要点明确，逻辑清晰，行文衔接流畅。
考前必练系列答案【题目】
How do you enter a room full of strangers? Do you walk right in full of confidence? Or do you try to slip in without being noticed? ___【1】___
In life, we admire those who do their tasks confidently. We prefer people who appear to know what they are doing. But where does that confidence begin?
Developing self-confidence starts very early. It’s parents’ role to get kids on the right track toward becoming confident people. ___【2】___ That can be done by focusing on the child’s strengths. Parents should encourage their children to try new things and take risks. When children make mistakes, their parents should still let them know that they are loved. Children whose parents do these things will likely develop into confident adults. ___【3】___ So what’s the solution?
With most things in life, practice makes perfect, and that is true of confidence skills. ___【4】___
Always hold your head high and look people in the eye. Answer questions clearly and confidently.
Focus on the things that you do well, and look for opportunities to use those abilities.
Prepare thoroughly for every project. You’ll approach the task more confidently knowing that you are ready.
___【5】___ It could be a good test score or a prize from a contest. Remind yourself that one success often leads to the next.
However, all humans fail at times, and you will too. Even with efforts to try all the above, you will never be perfect. But you can learn to love and accept yourself and live your life with confidence.
Keep in mind an item that reminds you of a recent success. The more you practice them, the easier they will become. The way you go into new situations show your level of self-confidence. Our goal is to prepare students to go into the world with confidence. To help that process, parents should always offer more praise than criticism. Learning from mistakes helps you face the same situation later without fear. But self-confidence still doesn’t come easily. |