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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
During the National Day holiday, I paid a visit my grandma in the countryside. It has been almost two years since I last saw her. In my memory, my grandma was a hardworking but strong woman full of energy. Whenever she saw me, she always hugged me deep. But when I gave her a hug this time, I found that she was much short and thinner than before. Her back was become bent and her hairs turned white. But luckily, she was still health. She could laugh like a child. To my happy, she could cook some delicious food for me. I love my grandma. I know he will always be there, helping me and loving me.

Answer 1

【答案】①paid a visit∧ my加to②has→had③but→and④deep→deeply⑤short→shorter⑥become去掉/become→becoming⑦hairs→hair⑧health→healthy⑨happy→happiness⑩he→she

【解析】本文讲述了作者国庆节期间去看望农村的奶奶，发现奶奶虽然比以前老了，但仍然像以前一样很爱作者。

（1）paid a visit∧ my加to 固定搭配：paid a visit to...拜访……，故在paid a visit∧ my加to。

（2）has→had 根据前面的During the National Day holiday可知，此处用过去完成时态，故把has改为had。

（3）but→and 句意：在我的记忆中，我奶奶是一个勤劳而坚强的女人。此处表示递进的并列关系，故把but改为and。

（4）deep→deeply 此处表示抽象概念“深深地”，故把deep改为deeply。

（5）short→shorter 根据than可知，用比较级，故把short改为shorter。

（6）become去掉/become→becoming 此处用一般过去时态的被动语态或现在进行时态的被动语态，表示“背弯了”或“背正弯了”，故把become去掉或改为becoming。

（7）hairs→hair 根据句意可知，此处hair是不可数名词，故把hairs改为hair。

（8）health→healthy 这里用形容词作表语，故把health改为healthy。

（9）happy→happiness 形容词性物主代词my后面用名词，故把happy改为happiness。

（10）he→she 根据上文内容可知，指grandma，故应该把he改为she。