题目内容
【题目】假定你是辰星中学的学生会主席李华。你校将于本周末举办英文戏剧节(English Drama Festival) 请给外教Kelly写一封信,邀请她前来观看并担任评委。主要内容包括:
1. 主题: Love English & Love Drama
2. 时间: 周日晚上19:00-21:00
3. 地点: 春蕾剧院
4. 参赛队伍: 高一的十个班级
5. 联系人: 李华(电话81691511)
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
My name is Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Chenxing Middle School.
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Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】My name is Li Hua, chairman of the Students’ Union of Chenxing Middle School. I’m writing to invite you to join the English Drama Festival this Sunday and be our judge.
In order to arouse students’ interest in learning English, we’ve planned to hold an English Drama Festival, the theme of which is Love English & Love Drama. Teams from ten classes in Grade One will compete with each other in Chunlei Theater. The competition will begin at seven in the evening, lasting about two hours.
We would feel much honored if you could join us. If you have any question about the festival, please call me at 81691511. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文属于材料作文中的邀请信。邀请信在形式上具有简短、热情的特点。通常适用于一些平常的事情的邀请,而且邀请人同被邀请人之间很熟悉。一般邀请信格式一般分为:第一, 说明与收信人的相关性与写作意图。 第二,写清邀请的时间(年、月、日、钟点)、地点、场合。第三,具体交代事情发生的地点以及具体的时间等内容。
亮点分析:本文结构合理,内容要点齐全。文章以简单句为主,语言相对简短,热情。文章中运用了结构较为复杂的定语从句(…the theme of which is Love English & Love Drama.)和If引导的状语从句:We would feel much honored if you could join us.和If you have any question about the festival, please call me at 81691511.同时还运用了非谓语作状语(The competition will begin at seven in the evening, lasting about two hours.)这些句式的运用,给文章增添了色彩,有了层次感,也是增分点。