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9．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mary，
It is two weeks until the summer camp ended．Look back on the days we spend together，I can't help missing you badly．You were such kind a girl that you made my camping days so happy．Still remember the day when we first met with？I cried as it was the first time that I had been away from home．I felt sadly and lonely．When you saw this，you talked to me like the old friend．You told me many funny story，which made me laugh a lot．That you did got me through that sleepless night．Thanks to your help，I adapted the new environment quickly．I really appreciate your kindness．How I wish to see you again!
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

分析 本文回忆了和朋友Mary一起度过的美好时光和对于朋友的思念之情．

解答 Dear Mary，
It is two weeks until the summer camp ended．Look back on the days we spend together，I can't help missing you badly．You were such kind a girl that you made my camping days so happy．Still remember the day when we first met with？I cried as it was the first time that I had been away from home．I felt sadly and lonely．When you saw this，you talked to me like the old friend．You told me many funny story，which made me laugh a lot．That you did got me through that sleepless  night．Thanks to your help，I adapted∧the new environment quickly．I really appreciate your kindness．How I wish to see you again!
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua
1．until改成since 考查固定句型．It is+时间段+since是英语的固定句型"自从…有多长时间了"．
2．Look改成Looking 考查非谓语．本句中的look与we是主谓关系，所以用现在分词在句中做状语．
3．spend改成spent 考查时态．根据look back可以判断是过去度过的日子，所以用过去时spent．
4．such改成so 考查固定句型．so+形容词+a+名词+that 是英语的固定句型．kind是形容词"和善的"．
5．删除with 考查介词．根据句意"我们第一次相遇"后无宾语不用with．
6．sasly 改成sad考查形容词．此处用形容词在句中做表语．
7．the 改成an 考查冠词．就像一个老朋友，这里是泛指，old 开头发元音，所以用an．
8．story改成stories 考查名词的数．story是可数名词，被many修饰，所以用复数形式．
9．That改成What 考查名词性从句．这是一个主语从句，从句中缺少宾语，所以用what来引导．
10．adapted后加to 考查固定搭配．adapt to是英语的固定搭配"适应"．

点评 短文改错考查涉及面广，但却有所侧重．考查点测试频率最高的是动词，涉及动词考查的有时态、语态、非谓语动词形式、情态动词和动词的用法等．此外，还考查名词、介词、代词、冠词、形容词、副词、连词等，还涉及到句型结构、行文逻辑、固定搭配等．

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增加：在缺词处加一个翻字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线．并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处．多者（从第11处起）不计分．
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