题目内容
【题目】书面表达
学完第三单元之后,全班开班会就学生上网进行了讨论。请你根据下列信息,写一篇题为The Internet has a negative effect on our lives.的作文。
1.尽管上网查资料很方便但很难知道这些资料是否真实准确。
2.经常使用网络毁了我们过正常生活的能力。
3.多数学生上网是玩游戏、聊天而不是真正学习或查阅资料
4.个别同学甚至沉迷网络游戏而逃课。
最后得出结论:上网可以,但必须限时
要求:1.覆盖以上内容,可作适当发挥;2.字数:100词左右
【答案】
The Internet has a negative effect on our lives
I think the Internet has a negative effect on our lives.
First of all, while the Internet is very convenient for information, it is difficult to tell whether the information is true and accurate. Besides, the Internet damage students’ ability to live a normal life. Students who spend much time on the Internet don't know how to communicate with their classmates face to face. In addition, surfing the Internet is a waste of time. In fact, most students are playing computer games or chatting instead of studying their lessons or looking for information. What's worse, a few students are so addicted to surfing the Internet that they often skip classes in order to go on line for fun.
In short, if we students want to surf the Internet, we must set a time limit for it.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇关于演讲比赛内容的作文,关于英特网对我们生活的影响,具有鲜明的时代性,生活性。话题接近生活,学生有话可说,有内容可写。要求学生明确写出英特网对我们生活造成的积极地和消极的影响,注意运用适当的连词,增加文章的连贯性
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语have an effect on 对。。影响;First of all首先;live a ..life过着。。的生活;communicate with与。。交流;instead of而不是;be addicted to沉迷于;In short总之;Students who spend much time on the Internet don't know how to communicate with their classmates face to face这个句子运用到who引导定语从句;In addition, surfing the Internet is a waste of time这个句子运用到动名词做主语;What's worse, a few students are so addicted to surfing the Internet that they often skip classes in order to go on line for fun.这个句子运用到so..that如此。以致于;