Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华, 你所在的社区给每户居民都发放了一张“邻里互助卡”, 居民可以通过它随时可以获得身边邻居的帮助,互助卡架起了一座连心桥. 请将这一情况反映给某报社, 并发表自己的看法.

注意: 1.词数 100左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数;

2.不得在作文中提及任何考生个人信息

参考词汇：互助卡 a help card 和谐的 harmonious 社区 community

Dear editor,

I am Li Hua, a senior middle school student. __________________________________

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m Li Hua, a senior middle school student. I’m glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card.

Recently, the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious. If you forget to bring keys, your neighbors will invite you to their homes, where you can wait and have a cup of tea. If there is something wrong with your computer, you can call a neighbor who is good at repairing it, according to the information offered by the card. If you are ill, but you can’t find a doctor at night, you can get help from the card. This is very useful, especially for the old left alone at home.

I think if people can help each other, the world will be a better place to live in. Don’t you think so?

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假如你是李华, 你所在的社区给每户居民都发放了一张“邻里互助卡”, 居民可以通过它随时可以获得身边邻居的帮助,互助卡架起了一座连心桥. 请将这一情况反映给某报社, 并发表自己的看法. 写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

注意: 1.词数 100左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数;2.不得在作文中提及任何考生个人信息

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语书信，采用三段式，格式正确，语言简练，结构严谨，运用高级句子。I’m glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card.宾语从句运用合理；the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious.比较级起到强调的作用；If you forget to bring keys, your neighbors will invite you to their homes, where you can wait and have a cup of tea.条件状语从句和where引导的非限制性定语从句完美结合；according to the information offered by the card.过去分词作后置定语；I think if people an help each other, the world will be a better place to live in宾语从句和条件状语从句巧妙运用；a better place to live in.动词不定式作后置定语；另外，because of，Recently, Don’t you think so?的运用为文章增色添彩。