题目内容
4.你是高一年级的张洋,你的外教 Anne 打算暑假期间在四川旅游,请你给他写封邮件,内容包括:1.推荐两个旅游目的地,并分别阐述理由;
2.感谢他一年来的教学;
3.期待下期的学习. 注意:1.词数:100 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.
Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning a trip around Sichuan this summer vacation.
It's my pleasure to offer you my suggestions.Among the numerous scenic spots,the first choice is Jiuzhaigou,which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.(高分句型一)It is the gorgeous natural scenery that attracts visitors from home and abroad.Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu,where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.(高分句型二)Good luck to your trip.
By the way,many thanks for teaching us during the past months.Through your international understanding courses,we not only develop our English abilities,but also have a better view of our world.(高分句型三)Look forward to attending your classes next term and enjoying greater progress.(112 words)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang.
分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息你是高一年级的张洋,你的外教 Anne 打算暑假期间在四川旅游,请你给他写封邮件.写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确几个要点:推荐两个旅游目的地,并分别阐述理由;感谢他一年来的教学; 期待下期的学习. 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:on the top of 处于顶端的;from home and abroad来自国内外;pick up捡起,学会;By the way顺便说一下;not only,but also 不仅,而且;Look forward to盼望;
Among the numerous scenic spots,the first choice is Jiuzhaigou,which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.(高分句型一)
Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu,where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.(高分句型二)
Through your international understanding courses,we not only develop our English abilities,but also have a better view of our world.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Anne,
Glad to know that you are planning a trip around Sichuan this summer vacation. It's my pleasure to offer you my suggestions.Among the numerous scenic spots,the first choice is Jiuzhaigou,which is always on the top of the must-go destinations.(高分句型一)It is the gorgeous natural scenery that attracts visitors from home and abroad.Another recommendation is Jinsha Relics Museum in Chengdu,where you can pick up a great deal of knowledge about our history.(高分句型二)Good luck to your trip.
By the way,many thanks for teaching us during the past months.Through your international understanding courses,we not only develop our English abilities,but also have a better view of our world.(高分句型三)Look forward to attending your classes next term and enjoying greater progress.(112 words)
Best wishes!
Yours,
Zhang Yang
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
A. | be | B. | were | C. | are | D. | have been |
A. | when | B. | as | C. | before | D. | that |
(43)Awhen instead of coming for me yourself,you sent servant James to(44)Ame.
I well remember my tears and(45)Das,seated high on your horse and attached tight to James,I rode of my new home.Night(46)Cbefore we finished the journey,and as it grew dark I became lonely and afraid."Do you thick she'll go to bed(47)Cwe get there?"I asked James anxiously."Oh,no,"he said encouragingly."She'll(48)Bfor you.When we get out of these woods you'll see her candle(49)Din the window."
(50)Bwe did ride out into the clearing,and there,sure enough,was your(51)CI remember you were waiting at the door,that you put your arms close(52)Dme and that you lifted me-a tired and confused little buy-(53)Afrom the horse.You had a fire burning on the hearth(炉边),a hot supper(54)Bon the stove.After supper you took me to my new room,heard me say mu prayers,and them sat beside me until I fell asleep.
You probably realize why I am(55)Dall this to your memory.Some day soon God will take you to a new home.Don't fear the(56)Afor the strange journey,or the dark messenger of death who will fetch you.God can be(57)Cto do as much for you as you were kind enough to do for me so many years ago,and you will be(58)Din God's care.I shall watch you and pray for you till you are out of sight,(59)Cwait for the day when I shall make the same journey myself and find you waiting at the end of the road to(60)Bme.
41.A.why | B.that | C.how | D.when |
42.A.journey | B.tour | C.ride | D.adventure |
43.A.disappointment | B.excitement | C.embarrassment | D.amazement |
44.A.fetch | B.comfort | C.contact | D.accompany |
45.A.calmness | B.pleasure | C.contentment | D.anxiety |
46.A.went | B.dropped | C.fell | D.ended |
47.A.after | B.before | C.since | D.when |
48.A.sit down | B.stand out | C.stay up | D.come over |
49.A.disappearing | B.standing | C.fading | D.shining |
50.A.Lately | B.Shortly | C.Recently | D.Meanwhile |
51.A.heart | B.mind | C.candle | D.gift |
52.A.at | B.in | C.for | D.around |
53.A.down | B.up | C.out | D.away |
54.A.staying | B.waiting | C.heating | D.burning |
55.A.warning | B.informing | C.reminding | D.recalling |
56.A.calling | B.instruction | C.evidence | D.guidance |
57.A.permitted | B.proved | C.trusted | D.asked |
58.A.nervous | B.joyful | C.desperate | D.safe |
59.A.or rather | B.in case | C.and then | D.let alone |
60.A.accept | B.greet | C.approve | D.bother |