题目内容
【题目】某英文报社组织了一次有关“健康生活方式”的英语征文活动，你有意参加。对于这两种谚语：“An apple a day keeps the doctor away．”和“An hour walking a day keeps the doctor away．”，你更倾向于哪个，是饮食更重要，还是锻炼更重要，抑或是饮食锻炼都重要。请根据自己的生活体验，表明自己的观点并简要陈述自己的理由。
注意：1．词数：120-150；2．题目自拟；3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：谚语proverb
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【答案】Exercise and Food are both Important to usNowadays more and more people notice that healthy life style is very important．But some people believe that healthy food and drink is more necessary than ever, just like the old proverb: An apple a day keeps the doctor away．However, other people believe that exercise is a healthy lifestyle, just like what they say: An hour walking a day keeps the doctor away．I think healthy living habits are very important for us．In current society, people have known the importance of keeping healthy and good life habit．Healthy living style includes two sides: we should eat plenty of fruits and meat or vegetables and drink lots of fresh water, besides doing exercises is essential．It brings us health as well as relaxation and pleasure．In short, healthy living habits bring many benefits, although sometimes you even do not realize．Remember:Food and exercise are both important to us．
【解析】该生具有很好的语言表达能力，语法结构、语态的掌握及高级词汇的运用基本正确。通篇十分流畅，可以看出作者厚实的写作功底。第一句就用动名词短语做主语抓住了改卷老师的眼球。后面衔接的也十分恰当，使用了however，besides等连接结构。文中使用了宾语从句、主语从句、although引导的让步状语从句、动名词短语做主语等等。本文语言流畅，高级结构应用自如，抓住了要点，是一篇佳作。
