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3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.作文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏子符号(∧)并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.

One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw parents.Mom said,"How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried."Tony promised her that this would never happen again.

分析 改错题要注意代词,连词以及词性、人称的转化.
做好短文改错题,可以从以下三方面去考虑:1.快速阅读短文,如抓住中心思想,从整体上对短文有个了解. 2.充分运用语言的基础知识,从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发,进行分析判断,尽快找出错误在何处. 3.重视整体和语境,从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组,判断是递进关系还是转折关系,是因果关系还是让步关系.

解答 One day,little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent.It was very crowded.Tony saw a toy on a 
                                                                                parents                                                       in
shop window.He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop.After looks at the toy for some 
                                     删去very                                                                  looking
time,he turned around and found where his parents were missing.Tony was scared and begun to cry.
                                            that或删去                                                                began 
A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside a shop.Five minutes later.Tony saw∧parents.Mom 
                                          told                             the                                                 his
said,"How nice to see you again!Dad and I were terrible worried."Tony promised her that this would 
                                                                       terribly
never happen again.
1.parent-parents   由母亲见到Tony所说"Dad and I were terrible worried."可知Tony是与父母一起去的,故应用parents;
2.on-in 这里要表达的意思为"在商店的橱窗里","在…里"应用介词in;    
3.删去very   该句表达意思为"如此喜欢以至于…"应使用搭配"so much that…",在该搭配中不能用very修饰much;
4.looks-looking    该处考查现在分词作状语,因逻辑主语he与look存在主谓关系,故look应该使用现在分词形式;
5.where-that或删去"父母不见了"作为found的宾语从句,该从句表意完全,所以应使用引导名词性从句时不表意的关系词that,又因为是宾语从句所以引导词that也可省去;
6.begun-began   由文章开始时"one day"可知本文使用时态主要应为一般过去时,所以该处应该是用begin的过去式began;
7.telling-told   在该句中"看见他在哭"和"告诉他在商店外等"是由"and"连接的并列谓语,所以应该用过去式told作谓语;
8.a-the   此处商店即为本文开始所指商店,对于前文已出现事物应用the修饰;
9.saw 和parents之间插入his    此处parents即为Tony的父母,所以要用his修饰限定;
10.terrible-terribly  这里修饰的是形容词worried,修饰形容词要用副词,所以应用副词terribly.

点评 考生在做题时需理清文章的事理,注意词性、语态、时态的转换,分析句子结构.

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