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15．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
As we have learned English for a very long time，we may complain it．We once made a joke which foreigners should learn Chinese．Now，it was not a joke anymore．More and more foreign people are interesting in Chinese，and many of us learn Chinese well．There was a hot show calling Chinese Bridge．I had been seen the show，and I was very impressed by the foreign students，whom spoke Chinese very well．We should learn from those foreigner because they showed us a way to learn a language good．

分析 本文主要讲述作者学英语的感受．我们学习英语很长时间了，总是抱怨学英语．现在，很多外国人对汉语很感兴趣，他们汉语学得很好，我们应当向这些人学习，因为他们给我们显示了学习语言的一种方法．

解答 As we have learned English for a very long time，we may complain∧it．We once made a joke which foreigners should learn Chinese．Now，it was not a joke anymore．More and more foreign people are interesting in Chinese，and many of us learn Chinese well．There was a hot show calling Chinese Bridge．I had been seen the show，and I was very impressed by the foreign students，whom spoke Chinese very well．We should learn from those foreigner because they showed us a way to learn a language good．
详解：
1．加about/of 考查介词．complain about/of意为"抱怨，诉苦"，是固定搭配．
2．which改为that 考查连词．从句foreigners should learn Chinese是joke的同位语从句，且意思是完整的，要用连词that．
3．was改为is 考查动词时态．根据句中状语now，要用一般现在时．
4．interesting改为interested 考查过去分词．be interested in意为"对…感兴趣"，是固定搭配．
5．us改为them 考查代词．them指代前文提到的More and more foreign people．
6．calling改为called 考查过去分词．show与call之间是动宾关系，用过去分词短语called Chinese Bridge作定语．
7．去掉been 考查动词语态．I与see之间是主谓关系，用过去完成时的主动语态．
8．whom改为who 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词foreign students在从句中作主语，用关系代词who．
9．foreigner改为foreigners 考查名词复数．foreigner是可数名词，其前有those修饰时要用复数形式．
10．good改为well 考查副词．learn是动词，要用副词修饰．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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