Question

7．假定你是李华，正在美国某中学做交换生，你校将举行以"建设文明校园"为主题的倡议活动．请你代表学生会给全体师生写一封倡议书，内容要点如下：1．该活动的意义；2．具体措施（遵守学校、班级规定；举止文明；关爱、帮助他人等）；3．号召人人从我做起．
注意：1．词数100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：a civilized campus   文明校园  regulation 规章，规定
Dear teachers and students，
Before long our school will launch a campaign aimed at creating a civilize campus．The following are what all of us should do．
First of all，we should obey rules and regulationsmade by our school and classes．Secondly，we should mind our own manners at any time．More importantly，we should care about others and try our best to help people in need．
It is everyone's responsibilityto create a civilized campus．So let's start now any do a little every day．only in this way can our campus become a better place to study and live．
The Students'Union．

Answer 1

分析 这是一封以"建设文明校园"为主题的倡议书．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明活动的主题以及目的；二简述活动的具体措施；三号召人人从我做起．
高分句型：
1．Before long our school will launch a campaign aimed at creating a civilize campus．句子里aimed at creating a civilize campus是过去分词做a campaign 的定语，表示"目的在于创建一个文明校园"．
不久我们学校会发起一项目的在于创建一个文明校园的活动．
2．only in this way can our campus become a better place to study and live．句子里only引导状语 in this way，主句 can our campus become a better place to study and live．用了部分倒装．
只有用这种方式，我们的校园才能是一个适宜学习和居住的更好的地方．

解答 Dear teachers and students，
     Before long our school will launch a campaign aimed at creating a civilize campus．【高分句型一】The following are what all of us should do．（点明活动的主题以及目的）
    First of all，we should obey rules and regulations made by our school and classes．Secondly，we should mind our own manners at any time．More importantly，we should care about others and try our best to help people in need．（简述活动的具体措施）
     It is everyone's responsibility to create a civilized campus．So let's start now any do a little every day．only in this way can our campus become a better place to study and live．【高分句型二】（号召人人从我做起）
                                                                  The Students'Union

点评 考查提纲类作文．
写完作文以后，要通读全文，检查内容是否符合要求，要点是否齐全，格式是否正确，词数是否合乎要求．最主要的是要检查句子是否符合英语习惯，句型是否正确，语法是否正确（包括句子结构、时态、语态、主谓一致等），检查单词是否误写、少写，习语搭配是否得当等，以及字母大小写、标点符号是否正确等，这就要求考生在定稿认真检查，仔细核对，及时发现并改正问题，保证要点齐全，句子完整通顺，力争减少失误．