Question

【题目】假设你即将参加你校主题为“Preparing Myself for College Life”的英语演讲比赛。请根据提示写一则简短的英语演讲稿。构想一下你的大学生活和你打算怎么做来适应大学生活。内容要点应包括：

1. 确定新的学习目标；

2. 学会独立生活；

3. 参加各种活动；

4. 处理好与同学的关系。

注意：1. 短文的内容要连贯、完整；

2. 字数：100 左右(开头己给出的单词不计入单词总数）。

Preparing Myself for College Life

Hello, everyone! My college life is right around the corner and I’m getting ready for it.

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That’s all. Thank you!

Answer 1

【答案】

Preparing Myself for College Life

Hello, everyone! My college life is right around the corner and I’m getting ready for it. As for me, college life is a brand new experience. In order to get used to college life as soon as possible, I should prepare myself for that from now on.

To begin with, after entering college, I intend to set new goals in my studies and stick to them until I succeed. What’s more, since I am away from home, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently. Without doubt I should do laundry and clean-up all by myself. In my spare time, I will take part in a diversity of activities, such as going to the English Corner to practise my spoken English. In addition, getting along with my classmates and teachers at college is another challenge for me, but for sure I’ll make it.

I have a strong belief that my college life will be fabulous.

That’s all. Thank you!

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于应用文，内容为演讲稿。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如since I am away from home, it is necessary for me to learn to live independently.为时间状语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量短语be ready for, in order to, begin with, stick to等短语。而且what’s more, in addition的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。