Question

15．最近，你们班就"是否应该帮助陌生人"展开了讨论，同学们就这一话题意见不一，你的看法如何？你认为怎样才能让爱心回归社会，建立人与人之间的信任？请根据讨论结果，以"Should We Help Strangers？"为题写一篇短文．

	原　因
赞成	帮助他人是美德； 帮助他人就是帮助自己； …
反对	怕陷入麻烦，甚至危险； 怕被误解； …
你的观点？（至少两点）

注意：1．词数150个左右；
     2．开头已写好，不计入总词数；
     3．覆盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
     4．文中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名．
     参考词汇：美德virtue
 Should We Help Strangers？
We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers．                          

Answer 1

分析 考察正反观点议论文．讨论的话题是"是否应该帮助陌生人"，有正反两方面的观点．要点都给了出来．本文题型是考生非常熟悉的正反观点类的议论文，在平时的练习中也有相应的模板．审题时注 意本文使用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主，发表个人意见时使用第一人称．本文的要点均已给出，考生需要使用合适的连接词把孤立的要点联系成文．如for one thing，for another； besides，firstly，secondly，last but not least等．也要使用一些高级的词汇词组如 be supposed to do sth，benefit 等以提升文章的档次分．在文章红可以适当使用一至两句谚语如：Every coin has two sides等可以大大提高文章的文采，提高获得高分的可能性．
【亮点说明】：本文中的高级结构还是较多的，如whether they are strangers or not．中的whether…or not
Only if everyone tries a little kindness，will society be full of love and trust be established between people．中的倒装句．Opinions are divided on this topic．以及n need of这个短语运用也较好．同时连接词的使用很到位，如However，In my opinion等．

解答 Should we help strangers？
     We used to appreciate those who like to help strangers．But nowadays people tend to be very cautious of helping strangers．Recently our class had a discussion about whether we should help strangers．（高分句型）Opinions are divided on this topic．
     Some think we should try to help others whether they are strangers or not．Helping others is a virtue，and it will make our society more harmonious．（高分句型）Besides，to some extent，helping others is helping oneself．We may come across some trouble and need others'help some day．If everyone turns a blind eye to our trouble and turns a deaf ear to our appeal for aid just because we are strangers to them，it's hard to imagine what our world will be like．（高分句型）
     However，others are afraid that helping others can sometimes bring us trouble or even put us in danger．（高分句型） Sometimes we are just misunderstood and thus have to pay the cost of kindness．
     In my opinion，we should try our best to help others when they are in need of help，but we should also protect ourselves to avoid getting into trouble．Only if everyone tries a little kindness，will society be full of love and trust be established between people．（高分句型）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．