Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Curiosity drove Wang Peng inside. It was full with people. The hostess, a very thin lady, come forward. "Welcome," she said. "My name is Yong Hui. I'll help you lose the weight and be fit in two week if you eat here every day." Then she give a menu to Wang Peng. There were few choices of food and drink on it: just rice, vegetables, fruit and water. Wang Peng was amazing at this and especial at the prices. It cost much than a good meal in his restaurant! He could not believe her eyes. He threw down the menu and hurried outsides. On his way home he thought about his own menu.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】with→of

【2】come→came

【3】删lose后的the

【4】week→weeks

【5】give→gave

【6】amazing→amazed

【7】especial→especially

【8】much后加more或much→more

【9】him→his

【10】outsides→outside

【解析】

【1】with→of 考查介词。be full of等于be filled with，表示“充满”，故把with改为of。

【2】come→came 考查动词的时态。根据上一句话It was full with people可知，用一般过去时。

【3】删lose后的the 考查固定短语。lose weight减肥。

【4】week→weeks 考查名词的复数形式。two后面加可数名词的复数形式。

【5】give→gave 考查动词的时态。整篇文章用一般过去时来叙述。

【6】amazing→amazed 考查形容词。修饰人用amazed，修饰物用amazing，故把amazing改为amazed。

【7】especial→especially 考查副词。句意：王鹏对于这个感到很吃惊尤其是对于价格。用副词修饰介词短语at the prices。

【8】much后加more或much→more 考查比较级。本句表示“比他在好的饭店花费的多”，有两种改法，一是在much后加more，much修饰比较级more；另一种是把much改为more，more是much的比较级。

【9】him→his 考查代词。句意：他不能相信他的眼睛。

【10】outsides→outside 考查副词。句意：他扔下菜单然后匆忙走出去。没有outsides这个词，改为outside，outside是副词，表示“外面地”。