题目内容
【题目】阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数为150左右。
Long ago, there was a big apple tree. A little boy loved to come and play around it every day. He climbed to the top of the tree, ate the apples, and took a nap under the shadow. He loved the tree and the tree also enjoyed playing with him.
As time went by, the little boy grew up and he no longer played around the tree.
One day, the boy came back to the tree, appearing sad. “Come and play with me," the tree asked the boy gently.
“I am no longer a kid; I won't play around trees anymore," the boy replied, “I want toys. I need money to buy them. ”
Sorry, but I don't have money. However, you can pick all my apples and sell them. Then, you will have money." They boy was so excited that he picked all the apples on the tree and left happily. The boy didn't come back after that.
The tree was upset.
One day, the boy returned and the tree was so joyful. “Come and play with me," the tree said.
“I don't have time to play. I have to work for my family. We need a house for shelter. Can you help me?" “Sorry, I don't have a house. But you can cut off my branches to build your house. ” So the boy cut all the branches of the tree and left with delight.
The tree was glad to see him happy but the boy didn't appear since then. The tree was again lonely and sad.
One hot summer day, the boy returned and the tree was delighted. “Come and play with me!” the tree requested.
“I am sad and becoming old. I want to go sailing to relax myself. Can you give me a boat?" “Use my trunk to build the boat and you can sail and be happy. ” So the boy cut the tree trunk to make a boat. He went sailing and did not show up for a long time.
Paragraph 1:
Many years later, the boy finally returned.
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Paragraph 2:
The apple tree is our mother.
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【答案】Paragraph 1:
Many years later, the boy finally returned. Tired, he returned to the apple tree. Seeing him, the tree said, “I’m sorry, boy, but now I have nothing for you.” “I don’t intend to get anything from you. With time going by, I come to realize nothing is better than a comfortable place to rest.” said the boy. Hearing this, the tree smiled with relief, adding, “my dying trunk is suitable for you. Please come here and rest.” The boy did as told and the tree smiled heartily.
Paragraph 2:
The apple tree is our mother. When we are young, she tries to attend to and play with us. After growing up, we leave her for some reasons and only come back when in trouble. But she is always out there, devoting whatever she owns without complaint. It is our happiness, rather than rewards, that she desires for. Therefore, try to put ourselves in her situation and show concern for her.
【解析】
本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知,文章讲述了一个小男孩与苹果树的故事:苹果树无止境的满足着小男孩,当小男孩老时,才了解到苹果树对自己的真正意义。这个故事中的苹果树就像是我们的父母,总是给我们想要的一切。
续写第一段开头为:许多年后,那个男孩终于回来了。…后面应该写孩子又来到苹果树下,苹果树只剩下树根了,再也没有东西可以给予男孩,只能供其休息了。
续写第二段开头为:苹果树就是我们的妈妈。…后面应该写苹果树就像我们的妈妈。当我们小的时候,我们喜欢和妈妈一起玩。等我们长大了,我们就离开妈妈。只有当我们有需要或者遇到麻烦的时候才回到她身边。无论怎样,妈妈都一直在那里,尽一切所能提供我们所需要的,只为我们快乐。