[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) .并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉.修改:在错的词下画一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线 (\) 划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。

Nowadays, after-class activities are becoming increasing popular in senior high school. We also have many kind of after-class activities in our school, such as English Corner, Sunshine Radio Station, Happy Reading Club and so on.

I’m most interested English Comer, because it can not only help me make some new friends but also improving my spoken English. Beside, I’m a member of Sunshine Radio Station. On Monday morning, every student are able to enjoy my sweet voice all over our school. Here I can had an unforgettable experience and I hope my dream of be a host may come true one day. These after-class activities make me become more confidence and enrich my school life as well as.

【答案】1.increasing→increasingly

2.kind→kinds

83.interested后加in

4.improving→improve

5.Beside→Besides

6.are→is

7.had→have

8.be→being

9.confidence→confident

10.as well后去掉as

【解析】第一处：考查副词。increasingly意为“越来越……”，是副词，修饰形容词popular。

第二处：考查名词。many修饰可数名词复数，故应将kind改为kinds。

第三处：考查介词。be interested in意为“对……感兴趣”，是固定短语。

第四处：考查谓语动词。can是情态动词，后面接动词原形。在该句中，help和improve并列。

第五处：考查副词。beside是介词，意为“在……旁边”，besides是副词，意为“此外，另外”。句意：我对英语角感兴趣……。此外，我是阳光广播站的一员。

第六处：考查主谓一致。every student是单数，根据主谓一致原则，谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式，故应将are改为is。

第七处：考查谓语动词。can是情态动词，后面接动词原形。故应将had改为have。

第八处：考查动名词。of是介词，后面接名词或动名词做宾语，故应将be改为being。

第九处：考查形容词。confident是形容词，做become的表语。

第十处：考查固定短语。As well as是介词短语，后面接名词做宾语。as well是副词短语，在句中单独使用。故在该句中应将as去掉。

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注意: 1.没处错误及修改均仅限一词。2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第十一处起)不计分。

One day, did not feeling well, Mr, Smith went to the hospital to have him examined.When he was given the test paper, he greatly shocked.“Am I dying?” He immediately feels very sick. Filled with sadness, he went back home, taking a lot of pills and even wrote his will.“Maybe a doctor made a mistake”, Mr. Smith thought and went to the hospital to have other examination.To his great joy, the doctor really made a mistake but he didn’t have cancer in all! Again, the whole world seemed beautiful.Mr.Smith went out for his most favourite sport happily .

【题目】“An apple a day keeps the doctor away” is one of the most common sayings in the English languages. This is because apples were one of the first foods that medical professionals recognized as healthy—their benefits became obvious when, quite simply, doctors found that people who ate apples were sick less often than those who did not. Today we have a more specific understanding of why apples are so beneficial to overall health.

Apples can help keep your levels of bad cholesterol (胆固醇) down. The pectin (果胶) in apples helps you to maintain cardiovascular health and reduce LDL cholesterol(which is the “bad” kind). Apples themselves do not add cholesterol to your diet and are full of water and fiber to help prevent the cholesterol in other foods you might digest. According to Health Diaries, people who eat two apples per day may lower their cholesterol by as much as 16 percent.

Apples are naturally low in calories and high in water content. Eating an apple can satisfy your hunger and keep you from reaching for high-sugar, high-calories snacks. By eating apples, you will be more able to maintain a healthy weight because they fill you up, potentially stopping you from eating food that encourages a waistline increase.

Apples contain respectable levels of boron (硼), which helps build healthy bones, and can also prevent diseases like arthritis. Apples are rich in vitamin C, which is known to help build immunity.

Studies have shown that apples can decrease the risk of breast cancer, colon cancer, and liver cancer. One theory is that the apple skins are responsible for this, so be sure not to peel your apple before you eat them, as you could remove some of the health benefits.

【1】What’s the main idea of the passage?

A. An explanation of an English saying.

B. How to make full use of apples.

C. Apples are beneficial to our health.

D. How to keep healthy in our daily life.

【2】By eating apples we can get many benefits EXCEPT________.

A. lowering the cholesterol B. keeping a healthy weight

C. building immunity D. preventing heart disease

【3】Which of the following can most probably replace the underlined word “respectable”?

A. Admirable. B. Considerable.

C. Reliable. D. Valuable.

【4】Which plays an important role in reducing the risk of breast cancer?

A. The pectin. B. The apple skins.

C. The flesh of apples. D. The fiber of apples.

【5】What’s the author’s attitude towards the effect of eating apples?

A. Positive. B. Negative.

C. Doubtful. D. Uncertain.

【题目】Chuck Berry, the man often called the “father of rock and roll” is still performing at 85. Another music great, Smokey Robinson, has described Chuck Berry as “the inspiration for all of today’s rock 'n' roll guitarists." And, Anthony Kiedis calls him “a musical scientist who discovered a cure for the blues.”

On stage, he became known for his wild performances, and his “duck walk” that many musicians copied. But his songwriting skills—some call him a rock and roll poet—and his guitar work really set him apart. Early in his career he played mostly blues for black audiences in clubs in St. Louis, Missouri. But the most popular music in the area was country. So this musical scientist mixed country and blues.

Chuck Berry was born on October 18th, 1926, in St. Louis, where he still lives. His mother, Martha, was a high school principal. He was born the fourth of six children. He started singing in church when he was six years old. His interest in music stuck with him.

A lot of Chuck Berry's material is about teenage life, especially school. Chuck Berry and two friends were arrested after they used a gun to steal a car. He was released from prison four years later. But that would not be the last of his legal problems over the years.

Filmmaker Taylor Hackford made a documentary called “Hail! Hail! Rock ‘n’ Roll,” named for a Chuck Berry song. It centered on the making of a concert to honor the musician on his sixtieth birthday in 1986. More than seventy-five artists and bands have done their own versions of Chuck Berry songs. Many have done several, including the Rolling Stones, Elvis Presley, Conway Twitty and Bruce Springsteen.

【1】Which of the following makes Chuck Berry different from other musicians?

A. Wild performance and duck walk.

B. skills of creating songs and guitar work

C. Duck walk and skills of creating songs.

D. Guitar work and wild performance.

【2】According to the text, Chuck Berry ________.

A. was influenced by the education of his mother

B. wrote most of his songs that reflected his teenage life

C. show his musical talent at an early age

D. didn’t have legal problems after he became a successful musician

【3】What can we learn from the text?

A. Chuck Berry had a lot of music used in filmmaking.

B. Chuck Berry is also interested in performing in movies.

C. Chuck Berry had a concert to celebrate his sixtieth birthday.

D. Chuck Berry has a great influence on many musicians.

【题目】Some years ago,writing in my diary used to be【1】usual activity. I would return from school and spend half an hour 【2】(record)the day’s events, feelings, and 【3】(impress)in my little blue diary. I did not really need 【4】(express) my emotions by way of words, but I gained a certain satisfaction from 【5】(see) my experiences forever recorded on paper, After all, isn’t accumulating(积累）memories a way of preserving the past?

【6】 I was thirteen years old, I went on a long journey【7】 foot in a great valley,【8】(equip) with pens, a diary, and a camera. During the trip, I was busy recording every incident, name and place I came across. I felt 【9】(pride) to be spending my time productively, dutifully preserving for future generations a detailed description of my travels. On my last night there, I 【10】(walk)out of my tent, diary in hand.

【题目】Many of my friends like fall and take it as their favorite season. Last weekend, I went outdoors and soon 【1】(find) a deeper appreciation for this season.

The change of leaf colors is a common reason given 【2】the love of fall. Each tree reacts【3】(different) to the change of the season. Some shed their leaves in hopes of reproducing; however, other 【4】(tree) remain green for as long as possible to gain additional energy from the sun to survive the winter. This effect 【5】(call) the flight-or-fight response.

Fall is a time of 【6】(reflect) and preparation for the year ahead. I have found a meaning of fall for me. I'm 【7】18-year-old boy in the final year of high school and my life is a work in progress. There are times I want to give up, but then I look around me and realize life keeps 【8】(move).The natural cycle of life is beautiful and doesn't stop growing so I have to learn to keep up.

The meaning of fall is different for each person. I encourage you 【9】(go) out to follow some path or sidewalk and discover 【10】fall means to you.

【题目】Medicine

Medicine is the science of keeping people healthy, and healing the sick. Humans have practiced forms of medicine for thousands of years. Today specially trained people called doctors practice medicine.

There are many parts to a doctor’ s job. Doctors’ first need to identify what is making a person sick. Then they decide on a treatment. They also predict when the patient will feel better.【1】 When treating patients, doctors work with many other people, including nurses and physician assistants.

Becoming a doctor involves years of education and training. Medical students first graduate from college.【2】Students usually earn a Doctor of Medicine degree in medical school. After medical school most graduates enter a residency ( 住院医师实习期)， which is a training program usually in a hospital.【3】During this time, new doctors can specialize in a particular type Of medicine in such areas as internal medicine (内科学) or surgery (外科). Finally, new doctors must pass a test to get a license to practice medicine.

In the 1900s scientists developed vaccines (疫苗) to prevent many diseases and drugs to treat many others. Doctors transplanted organs from one person into another. They used many machines to help them to identify and treat diseases.【4】

Today doctors have many ways to help patients heal.【5】 For example, scientists are still searching for cures for cancer, AIDS, and many other diseases.

A. They can be used to prevent diseases.

B. In addition, doctors try to prevent illnesses.

C. Doctors thought diseases were caused by the gods.

D. Then they spend three to four years in medical school.

E. But there are still many unanswered questions in medicine.

F. They also learned how good nutrition helped people to stay healthy.

G. During a residency, experienced doctors train the new doctors for three to seven years.

【题目】The 1920s was a decade of wealth, decadence(堕落) and social changes. They were known as the Roaring Twenties, and the best place to experience this exciting time was New York City. But what was it really like?

Prohibition

In 1919, a new law in the US known as Prohibition made it illegal to buy and sell alcohol. But Prohibition didn’t stop people drinking; it just drove the sale of strong alcoholic drink underground. Bootleggers(走私贩) waited off the coast of New York after dark and brought illegal alcohol into the city.

Jazz

Jazz was the music of New York in the 1920s. In fact, the decade is called Jazz Age. The best place to listen to this new form of music was the Cotton Club in Harlem. All the great jazz musicians played at the Cotton Club, including Louis Armstrong, Dizzy Gillespie and Duke Ellington. Also, in 1942 George Gershwin composed the jazz—influenced Rhapsody in Blue. The piece has been called “a musical portrait of New York” and was used by Woody Allen in his film Manhattan.

Art Deco

Art Deco was the most popular style of the 1920s, with bright colors and geometric designs; it can be seen in the art, architecture and inside designs of the period. New York is full of Art Deco buildings, but the most famous ones are the Chrysler Building (built between 1928 and 1930) and the Empire State Building (built between 1930 and 1931).

The Great Depression

On 29th October, 1929, the Roaring Twenties came to a dramatic end. On that day (known as “Black Tuesday”), the US stock market crashed, causing the Great Depression. The economic downturn lasted ten years and affected most of the Western world. Unemployment in America reached 25% and the country didn’t recover until after World War II.

【1】We know from the passage that in 1919 people ________ alcohol in the US.

A. began to buy and sellB. stopped producing

C. completely stopped tradingD. secretly bought and sold

【2】The 1920s is called _________.

A. Country Music TimeB. Jazz Age

C. Folk Music AgeD. Pop Age

【3】We infer from the passage that the US _________ in the year 1930.

A. was in a bad economic state

B. was in good economic condition

C. developed at a rapid speed

D. had many dramatic plays

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties. The main problem was in that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate everything into Chinese. My teacher advised me to keep diaries. I followed her advices. Happily it worked. Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher. She liked it very much that she read it to the class. Everyone said the story was the good one. I was great encouraged by their words.

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