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11．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Even today，a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady，help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date．When a man take a woman out for a dinner，it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down．On a crowding train or bus，it is proper for a man offer a woman his seat，particular if she is old or carries a baby．Even when it comes to shake hands，ladies come first．It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting．Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first，the man shouldn't offer theirs．

分析 虽然现在提倡男女平等，但是尊敬女士还是必要的，文章介绍男士对女士的一些礼貌的行为．

解答 Even today，a man with good manner will politely open the door for a lady，help her put on her coat when necessary and see her safely to the door of her home before a date．When a man take a woman out for a dinner，it is considered impolite to help her with her chair when she gets up or sits down．On a crowding train or bus，it is proper for a man∧offer a woman his seat，particular if she is old or carries a baby．Even when it comes to shake hands，ladies come first．It is impolite for a man to extend his hand for a handshake upon first greeting．Unless a woman does not extend her hand to the man first，the man shouldn't offer theirs．
详解：
1．manner改为manners 考查名词服饰．甚至今天一个有礼貌的人都会为女士开门．Good manners礼貌．
2．before改为after 考查介词．根据句意可知，是在约会过后做的一些事情，故用after．
3．take改为takes 考查试题．When引导的是时间状语从句，用一般现在时，而且主语是第三人称代词，所以用takes．
4．去掉a 考查冠词及．dinner为晚餐，不需要用冠词．
5．impolite改为impolite 考查副词．根据常识男士帮助她搬椅子被认为是礼貌的．impolite→polite
6．crowding改为cowded 考查形容词．在拥挤的汽车或是火车上，男士给女士让座是适合的．形容词"拥挤的"：crowded．
7．particular改为particularly 考查副词．尤其是当她老了，或是带小孩的时候．修饰这句话用副词particularly．
8．shark改为sharking 考查动名词．甚至当说到握手的时候，都是女士优先．When it comes to后面接动名词shaking．
9．unless改为if 考查连接词．根据句意可知，此处是一个条件状语从句，用if引导．
10．theirs改为his 考查名词性物主代词．主语是the man，后面形容词性物主代词用his．

点评 短文改错主要考查学生将所学的基本语法知识运用在具体的语境中，平时要多积累一些相关的语法知识．

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3．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文． 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处． 错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号，并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1每处错误下画一横线，并在该词下面写互相修改的词．
     2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
It was cloudy day with little rain in the air．I stood at the roadside waiting for a taxi while suddenly I felt a voice beside me．It was a boy who was wearing poor cloth．I felt very disgusted that I tried to pull myself away．The boy kept follow me shouting out"Big brother!Big brother!"and I didn't answer him at all．I heard him call out again，which makes me angry．So I shouted at him that we had no money to spare．However，the boy said to me，"Brother，will you please to help me cross the road？"I held the boy′s hand firm and helped him cross the road．
20．Without your help，I couldn'thave finished （finish） the task last night．
2．It was at least two months before Christmas when nine-year-old Almie Rose told her father and me that she wanted a new bicycle．As Christmas drew nearer，her （36）Dfor a bicycle seemed to fade，（37）A so we thought．We （38）Cthe latest fashion，Baby-Sitter's Club dolls，and a doll house．Then，much to our （39）B，on December 23rd，she said that she"really wanted a bike more than anything  else．"
It was just too （40）D，what with all the details of （41）A Christmas dinner and buying last-minute gifts，to take the time to （42）Cthe"right bike"for our little girl．So，here we were-Christmas Eve around 9：00p．m．，with Rose and her brother，Dylan，sitting in their beds．We could now think only of the bicycle，the （43）D．and being parents who would （44）Btheir child．
"（45）A if I make a little bicycle out of clay and write a note that she could （46）C the clay model in for a real bike？"her dad asked．The theory being that （47）Athis is an expensive item and she is"such a big girl，"it would be much better for her to pick it out．So he （48）C the next four hours painstakingly working with clay to （49）Da tiny bike．
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"Does this （53）A that I trade in this bike that Daddy made me for a real one？"Beaming，I said"Yes．"
Almie Rose had tears in her eyes when she replied，"I could never trade in this （54）Dbicycle that Daddy made me．I'd rather （55）Bthis than get a real bike．"
At that moment，we would have moved heaven and earth to buy her every bicycle on the planet!

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37．A．orB．butC．thusD．as
38．A．valuedB．enjoyedC．purchasedD．tried
39．A．despairB．surpriseC．delightD．sorrow
40．A．specialB．urgentC．difficultD．late
41．A．preparingB．servingC．havingD．ordering
42．A．bargainB．makeC．selectD．compare
43．A．excitementB．sorrowC．hateD．guilt
44．A．encourageB．disappointC．injureD．interest
45．A．WhatB．HowC．WhyD．Where
46．A．changeB．turnC．tradeD．sell
47．A．sinceB．thoughC．unlessD．if
48．A．sparedB．savedC．spentD．took
49．A．chooseB．repairC．rideD．create
50．A．sadB．excitedC．confusedD．embarrassed
5l．A．noteB．packageC．bagD．envelop
52．A．appreciatedB．rejectedC．openedD．accepted
53．A．meanB．promiseC．allowD．predict
54．A．falseB．expensiveC．strangeD．charmmng
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