Question

【题目】每个人对待幸福的态度和感觉都不一样，请你就What Is Happiness? 这一话题谈谈你对幸福的看法。

主要内容如下：

1.不同的人对幸福有不同的看法(从物质、精神等方面分析)；

2.我对幸福的看法。

注意：

1.词数不少于120；

2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。

Answer 1

【答案】

Happiness means different things to different people. Some people believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness. Some other people believe that holding a high position in the government is happiness. In this way, they have not only money but also power, which can’t be bought by money.

However, there are still some people who have quite opposite opinions. They value their belief, or their intelligence, or their health, which they think can make them happy.

For me, happiness is closely tied to my studies, my work and my family. When I make great progress in studies, when I make contributions to the society through my work, when all the members in my family live in harmony, sharing good and sad times, I will be happy. Although the definition of happiness depends on each individual, my “wealth” of happiness is in my studies, my work and my family.

【解析】

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【亮点说明】文章第一段第二句是一个that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句以及which引导非限制性定语从句的复杂句。Some people believe that if they are wealthy, they will be able to do anything they want, which means happiness. 有一些人认为如果他们很富有，他们就可以做任何他们想做的事情，这就叫幸福。第三句是一个that引导的宾语从句，表达出另一部分人的观点：Some other people believe that holding a high position in the government is happiness.另一些人认为在政府位居高官是幸福。第四句是which引导的非限制性定语从句 In this way, they have not only money but also power, which can’t be bought by money. 这样，他们既有权又有钱，这是不可能用钱买到的。Which修饰的是整个主句。文章第二段分别为一个定语从句和一个非限制性定语从句。第二段第一句是who引导的定语从句However, there are still some people who have quite opposite opinions. 然而，还是有一些人有着完全相反的观点。Who的先行词是people。第二句是which引导的非限制性定语从句They value their belief, or their intelligence, or their health, which they think can make them happy.他们珍视自己的信仰、智力或者健康，这些让他们认为能够使他们快乐的东西。第三段陈述自己的观点。第二句是一个排比式的、when引导的时间状语从句When I make great progress in studies, when I make contributions to the society through my work, when all the members in my family live in harmony, sharing good and sad times, I will be happy. 当我在学习上取得进步的时候，当我通过工作对社会做出贡献的时候，当我的家人都过得很和谐，分享快乐和苦难的时候，我会很高兴。最后一个句子是although引导的让步状语从句Although the definition of happiness depends on each individual, my “wealth” of happiness is in my studies, my work and my family.尽管幸福的定义取决于个人，我幸福的财产在于我的学习、我的工作以及我的家人。