Question

假设你是李华,看到某中学生报的"热点话题"专栏讨论的主题是"对待父母的过度呵护我们应该怎么办",请你就此话题发表一下自己的观点．请你用英语给该专栏的编辑写一封信,发表你的个人意见．

写作要点: 1．非常感激父母对我的爱；2．与父母交流自己的真实感受:自己长大了,能处理自己的事情；3．相信父母会更理智地爱我．

注意:1．信的开头已给出,但不计入总词数； 2．词数:110左右．

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children．So it is with my parents．I really feel lucky that I have such kind parents．And I deeply appreciate their love for me．

However, I have to admit sometimes they show me so much love that I feel uneasy with them．I think I am old enough to handle my personal affairs．At this time instead of refusing their help rudely, I’d like to talk with them openly and politely．I will tell them I am old enough to deal with some of my own matters on my own．I’ll let them know what I need is their belief in me and their support．I believe my parents will finally understand me．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析： 英语提纲式作文为考生提供了题目与一个简单的写作提纲，将考生的写作控制在一定范畴。它要求考生紧扣题目主题，并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。同时，为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。考生还需要注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。

【亮点说明】本篇习作第一段就点明第一个要点，对父母的爱充满感激，直奔主题。第二段开始用了一个however，直接把笔锋一转，说明父母盲目的爱已经对我有所困扰。同时，使用这么一句话At this time instead of refusing their help rudely, I’d like to talk with them openly and politely．表明自己目前的真实感受。最后，I believe my parents will finally understand me．表明作者对父母的爱、信任和期待。

考点：考查提纲作文