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假设你是李华,看到某中学生报的"热点话题"专栏讨论的主题是"对待父母的过度呵护我们应该怎么办",请你就此话题发表一下自己的观点．请你用英语给该专栏的编辑写一封信,发表你的个人意见．

写作要点: 1．非常感激父母对我的爱；2．与父母交流自己的真实感受:自己长大了,能处理自己的事情；3．相信父母会更理智地爱我．

注意:1．信的开头已给出,但不计入总词数； 2．词数:110左右．

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Dear Editor,

As is known, all the parents love their children．So it is with my parents．I really feel lucky that I have such kind parents．And I deeply appreciate their love for me．

However, I have to admit sometimes they show me so much love that I feel uneasy with them．I think I am old enough to handle my personal affairs．At this time instead of refusing their help rudely, I’d like to talk with them openly and politely．I will tell them I am old enough to deal with some of my own matters on my own．I’ll let them know what I need is their belief in me and their support．I believe my parents will finally understand me．

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析： 英语提纲式作文为考生提供了题目与一个简单的写作提纲，将考生的写作控制在一定范畴。它要求考生紧扣题目主题，并根据提纲提示的思路和要点展开段落。这实际上是对考生思路和文章写作范围所作的明确限定。因此，提纲中所列举的要点要全部涉及到，一个也不能遗漏。同时，为了提高文章档次，考生应在保证内容要点齐全的同时进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。因此，该类型的书面表达具有一定的灵活性，能较好地体现考生的英语思维能力。考生还需要注意句子间的正确联系，注意词语的丰富和句型的多样。

【亮点说明】本篇习作第一段就点明第一个要点，对父母的爱充满感激，直奔主题。第二段开始用了一个however，直接把笔锋一转，说明父母盲目的爱已经对我有所困扰。同时，使用这么一句话At this time instead of refusing their help rudely, I’d like to talk with them openly and politely．表明自己目前的真实感受。最后，I believe my parents will finally understand me．表明作者对父母的爱、信任和期待。

考点：考查提纲作文

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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

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