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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ),并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

My dream school starts at 8:30 a. m and ends at 3:30 p. m. There have three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon. We didn’t need to do so many homework. Therefore, we have more time for after-school activities. For an example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

1.have--are

2.didn’t—don’t

3.many--much

4.去掉an

5.hour--hours

6.look--looks

7.去掉the

8.sat--sit

9.加上to

10.helpfully--helpful

【解析】

试题分析:

1.文中第二句。考查固定句型:there be…,解释为:有….。此句型谓语动词遵循就近原则,和最近的名词保持一致,也就是和lessons保持一致,故把have改成are。这个句型是学生经常出错的句型,一定要特别注意。

2.文中第三句。考查时态。根据上下文的时态可知,此句需要用一般现在时而不是一般过去时,所以把didn’t改成don’t。

3.文中第三句。句意为:我们没有必要做这么多的家庭作业。考查homework为不可数名词,因此修饰它的词用much而不是many,故把many改成much。

4.文中第五句。考查固定短语:for example,意为:例如。故把原句中的for an example中的冠词an去掉。

5.文中第五句。句意为:我们每天可以阅读一个半小时以及运动一个小时。hour为可数名词,一个半超过一,所以用hour的复数形式。故把hour改成hours。

6.文中第二段第一句。句意为:我梦想中的学校看起来就像一个大花园。考查主谓一致。主语为my dream school单数,故其谓语动词应为looks。故把look改成looks。

7.第二段第二句。句意为:教室旁有各种各样的花和树。考查all kinds of等后面的名词前不用冠词。故把the去掉。

8.第二段第三句。句意为:我们可以躺在早地上休息或坐在湖旁听音乐。考查并列结构。Or连接的部分前后应保持一致,故把sat改成sit。

9.第二段第三句。考查固定短语:listen to music,意为听音乐。故加上to。

10.

考点:考查短文纠错

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